聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me feel relaxed. We often share our daily experiences and challenges, which makes me feel supported and understood.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to give a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Usually, I chat with my friends about my daily routine and my studies. For example, I share what I have learned and discuss our plans for the future.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by reducing filler words and making sentences more concise. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas clearly.

範例: I usually prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to hear different opinions. However, talking to one friend can be more relaxing and personal.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and a bit unclear. Try to complete your thoughts and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

範例: Although many people prefer social media, I prefer face-to-face communication because facial expressions help convey emotions better, making conversations more meaningful.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains filler words and some grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when our opinions differ. However, I believe such disagreements are normal and happen in families and friendships regularly.

× On regular basis I talk with them about my, uh, routine work, did what I do every day, but I am studying what I am pursuing and uh, moreover, I like to share. I like to share.

✓ On a regular basis, I talk with them about my routine work, what I do every day, but I am studying what I am pursuing and, moreover, I like to share. I like to share.

The phrase 'did what I do every day' incorrectly uses the past participle 'did' where a simple present tense or a clearer expression is needed. The sentence also lacks the article 'a' before 'regular basis'. The correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy by removing 'did' and adding 'a' before 'regular basis'.

× I usually like to talk with the group of people because in a group we can have views of everyone rather than talking to only one friend.

✓ I usually like to talk to a group of people because in a group we can have everyone's views rather than talking to only one friend.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used after 'talk'; the correct preposition is 'to' when referring to the person or group one is speaking to. Also, 'the group of people' should be 'a group of people' to indicate any group, not a specific one. Additionally, 'views of everyone' is better expressed as 'everyone's views' for natural English usage.

× Today in the world of social media, many people like to communicate through that through the means of social media but I would myself like to talk face to face because facial expressions are more necessary and then virtual talking we can easily express our.

✓ Today, in the world of social media, many people like to communicate through social media, but I myself would like to talk face to face because facial expressions are more necessary, and through virtual talking, we cannot easily express ourselves.

The phrase 'through that through the means of social media' is redundant and awkward; it is corrected to 'through social media'. The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is misplaced and should follow 'I'. The sentence ends abruptly and lacks the object for 'express our'; it should be 'express ourselves'. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, sometimes while talking there are some points where I argue with my friends and they also do the same because sometimes our views contradict with each other.

✓ Yes, sometimes while talking, there are points where I argue with my friends and they also do the same because sometimes our views contradict each other.

The preposition 'with' after 'contradict' is incorrect; 'contradict' is a transitive verb and does not require a preposition before its object. Removing 'with' makes the sentence grammatically correct.