聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps strengthen our relationships. For example, last week, I went to the mall with a close friend, and we talked about our university days, which brought back many good memories.

建議: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer with specific details. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, mention specific topics you discuss and explain why.

範例: Usually, my friends and I talk about current events and news because it helps us stay informed and connect better. For instance, last time at school, we discussed a recent event that affected our community.

建議: Make your answer clearer by using correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Start with a clear preference, then explain why with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because it feels more comfortable. This way, I can understand the person better and have a deeper conversation.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and improve grammar. Give a clear preference and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because it is easier and more convenient. For example, I often use apps like Snapchat and Instagram to chat with my friends anytime and anywhere.

建議: Clarify your answer by using correct vocabulary and grammar. Make sure to answer the question directly. Explain your opinion with specific examples and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Sometimes, I argue with my friends because it helps us understand each other better and strengthen our relationship. For example, last week, I had a discussion with a friend, and we both felt more comfortable after sharing our opinions.

× Actually, I prefer to chat with the Prince because it's helped me to develop the relationship together.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with the Prince because it has helped me to develop the relationship together.

The phrase 'it's helped' is a contraction of 'it has helped', which is the correct present perfect tense to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Using 'it's helped' is acceptable, but in spoken English, clarity is important. The sentence is acceptable but could be clearer by expanding the contraction.

× Uh, for example, last week we hang out, uh, the mall and uh, we chatting together about the times when we out study together in the university.

✓ Uh, for example, last week we hung out at the mall and chatted together about the times when we studied together at the university.

The verbs 'hang out' and 'chatting' need to be in the past tense to match 'last week'. 'Hang out' becomes 'hung out', 'chatting' should be 'chatted'. Also, 'out study' is incorrect; it should be 'studied'. Preposition 'at' is used with 'mall' and 'university'.

× Uh, for example, last week we hang out, uh, the mall and uh, we chatting together about the times when we out study together in the university.

✓ Uh, for example, last week we hung out at the mall and chatted together about the times when we studied together at the university.

The preposition 'at' is used to indicate location with 'mall' and 'university'. The original sentence missed 'at' before 'the mall' and 'the university'.

× Uh, for example, last week we hang out, uh, the mall and uh, we chatting together about the times when we out study together in the university.

✓ Uh, for example, last week we hung out at the mall and chatted together about the times when we studied together at the university.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used in present participle form here; it should be past tense 'chatted' to match the past time reference 'last week'.

× Actually, actually we usually talk about a public information, which is the a great because it's help us to develop a relationship with us.

✓ Actually, we usually talk about public information, which is great because it helps us to develop our relationship.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'A public information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'The a great' is incorrect; it should be 'great'. 'With us' is redundant after 'develop a relationship'.

× Actually, actually we usually talk about a public information, which is the a great because it's help us to develop a relationship with us.

✓ Actually, we usually talk about public information, which is great because it helps us to develop our relationship.

The verb 'help' must be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Actually, actually we usually talk about a public information, which is the a great because it's help us to develop a relationship with us.

✓ Actually, we usually talk about public information, which is great because it helps us to develop our relationship.

'Information' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the article 'a'.

× However, the last time we're chatting together, I was at school which we which all of us talking about.

✓ However, the last time we were chatting together, I was at school, which we all talked about.

'We're chatting' should be past tense 'we were chatting' to match 'the last time'. 'Talking' should be past tense 'talked'. The sentence structure is awkward and corrected for clarity.

× Most of people prepare to chat with the group, but I think chat with the wonder friends, it's more comfortable to me because it's helped me to understand the person which who I talked with him and it's world development, the conversation with us.

✓ Most people prefer to chat with a group, but I think chatting with one friend is more comfortable for me because it helps me to understand the person I talk with and it develops our conversation.

'Prepare' should be 'prefer' to express preference. 'Chat' should be 'chatting' to function as a gerund. 'Wonder friends' is incorrect; likely meant 'one friend'. 'It's helped' should be 'it helps' for present tense. 'Which who I talked with him' is incorrect; simplified to 'I talk with'. 'World development' is unclear; replaced with 'develops our conversation'.

× Most of people prepare to chat with the group, but I think chat with the wonder friends, it's more comfortable to me because it's helped me to understand the person which who I talked with him and it's world development, the conversation with us.

✓ Most people prefer to chat with a group, but I think chatting with one friend is more comfortable for me because it helps me to understand the person I talk with and it develops our conversation.

'Prepare' is incorrect modal verb usage here; 'prefer' is the correct verb to express preference.

× Most of people prepare to chat with the group, but I think chat with the wonder friends, it's more comfortable to me because it's helped me to understand the person which who I talked with him and it's world development, the conversation with us.

✓ Most people prefer to chat with a group, but I think chatting with one friend is more comfortable for me because it helps me to understand the person I talk with and it develops our conversation.

'Which who I talked with him' is an incorrect and redundant use of pronouns. It should be simplified to 'the person I talk with'.

× Actually, I prefer to communicate in the social social media because it provide for me the easier way to discuss with our people.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate via social media because it provides me with an easier way to discuss with people.

'In the social social media' is incorrect; 'via social media' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Provide for me' should be 'provides me with'. 'Our people' is unclear; 'people' is sufficient.

× Actually, I prefer to communicate in the social social media because it provide for me the easier way to discuss with our people.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate via social media because it provides me with an easier way to discuss with people.

'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Moreover, uh I always chatting in the online applications such as Snapshot and Instagram which is the easier way to discuss with people and conversations.

✓ Moreover, I am always chatting on online applications such as Snapchat and Instagram, which is an easier way to discuss with people and have conversations.

'Chatting in the online applications' should be 'chatting on online applications'. 'Snapshot' is likely 'Snapchat'. 'Conversations' needs a verb; added 'have'.

× Moreover, uh I always chatting in the online applications such as Snapshot and Instagram which is the easier way to discuss with people and conversations.

✓ Moreover, I am always chatting on online applications such as Snapchat and Instagram, which is an easier way to discuss with people and have conversations.

'Always chatting' requires an auxiliary verb 'am' to form present continuous tense: 'I am always chatting'. Also corrected preposition and app name.

× Actually, I sometime agree with my friends because because it's help us develop a stronger relationship.

✓ Actually, I sometimes agree with my friends because it helps us develop a stronger relationship.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'It's help' should be 'it helps' for third person singular present tense.

× Actually, I sometime agree with my friends because because it's help us develop a stronger relationship.

✓ Actually, I sometimes agree with my friends because it helps us develop a stronger relationship.

'Sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at some point'; 'sometimes' means 'occasionally' and is correct here.

× Uh, for example, last week I discussed with my friends and I agree with him it, he felt comfortable and confident.

✓ For example, last week I discussed with my friends and I agreed with him; he felt comfortable and confident.

'Agree' should be past tense 'agreed' to match 'last week'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Uh, for example, last week I discussed with my friends and I agree with him it, he felt comfortable and confident.

✓ For example, last week I discussed with my friends and I agreed with him; he felt comfortable and confident.

The phrase 'I agree with him it' is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected to 'I agreed with him' for clarity and correctness.

× Uh, however, it's uh, good things to.

✓ However, it's a good thing too.

'Good things' is plural but 'it's' refers to singular. Corrected to singular 'a good thing'. 'To' is corrected to 'too' meaning 'also'.