聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and shows enthusiasm, but it is a bit repetitive and slightly unclear in parts. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'If it's not my parents, then it's my friends,' you could directly say you enjoy chatting with friends. Also, avoid phrases like 'talk about anything with them just for anything' which are vague. Use clear and specific expressions.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we share similar interests and can talk about a variety of topics comfortably.

建議: Your answer covers the topic but lacks fluency and has some hesitation ('uh'). Also, the phrase 'plan on Hangouts' is unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific. For example, mention particular activities you plan or specific topics you discuss.

範例: We usually chat about school, our daily routines, and interesting events that happen. Additionally, we often plan to hang out together during weekends or holidays.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and better linking words. For example, instead of '1 singular person,' say 'one close friend.' Also, use connectors like 'because' and 'so' effectively to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer to share my thoughts with one close friend because I trust them more. I think it's unnecessary to share personal information with a whole group, so I feel more comfortable talking to just one person.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to improve flow. For example, you can say 'I prefer social media because it allows me to connect instantly with friends who are far away.'

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because it lets me instantly connect with friends who live far away, making it easy to share thoughts anytime.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer linking words. Instead of repeating 'depends on the situation,' try to combine ideas smoothly. Also, avoid phrases like 'raise that statement' which sound unnatural.

範例: I don't argue with friends often; however, if I feel strongly about a point, I express my opinion confidently. It really depends on the circumstances.

× We chat about various kinds of things and relate to many of them.

✓ We chat about various kinds of things and relate with many of them.

The verb 'relate' is commonly followed by the preposition 'with' when indicating connection or association. Using 'to' here is incorrect. Hence, 'relate with many of them' is the correct form.

× We chat about various types of things such as school, daily routines or instances that take place that are worth talking about.

✓ We chat about various types of things such as school, daily routines, or instances that take place which are worth talking about.

The phrase 'that are worth talking about' is better replaced with 'which are worth talking about' to correctly introduce a non-restrictive clause. Also, a comma is needed before 'or' in a list of three or more items for clarity.

× And uh, we usually talk about hanging out or plan on Hangouts.

✓ And uh, we usually talk about hanging out or plan Hangouts.

The verb 'plan' is directly followed by the object without a preposition. Using 'on' after 'plan' is incorrect. Therefore, 'plan Hangouts' is the correct usage.

× I prefer sharing everything to 1 singular person, one person that I can trust, mainly because I feel that it is perhaps unnecessary to share information, especially personal information, to an entire group of people, so it's much comfortable sharing it to just one friend.

✓ I prefer sharing everything with one person, someone I can trust, mainly because I feel that it is perhaps unnecessary to share information, especially personal information, with an entire group of people, so it's much more comfortable sharing it with just one friend.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect when indicating the recipient of sharing; 'with' is the correct preposition. Also, '1 singular person' is redundant and awkward; 'one person' suffices. 'Much comfortable' should be 'much more comfortable' to correctly express comparative degree.

× I prefer communicating via social media because you can get in contact with a friend who's at a longer distance at any point of time, and if you just really need to share a thought with them at that instant, you could contact them via social media.

✓ I prefer communicating via social media because you can get in contact with a friend who is far away at any time, and if you really need to share a thought with them instantly, you can contact them via social media.

The phrase 'at a longer distance' is awkward; 'far away' is more natural. 'At any point of time' is better expressed as 'at any time'. 'At that instant' can be simplified to 'instantly'. Also, 'could' implies possibility but 'can' is better here to express ability or possibility in present context.