聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu tính tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'We usually chatting' nên là 'We usually chat'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, I definitely like chatting with friends. We usually chat online through social media platforms like Facebook and Instagram because they are very popular nowadays.

建議: Bạn nên tránh nói mơ hồ và lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'assigns men'.

範例: We usually chat about personal topics like love and emotions, as well as school-related matters such as assignments and exams.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'this is depends' nên là 'this depends') và số nhiều (friend -> friends). Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

範例: It depends on the situation, but I prefer chatting with a group of friends because I can get more comments and advice from them.

建議: Bạn nên dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn như 'facial expressions' thay vì 'facial emotions'. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ.

範例: Personally, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see the other person's facial expressions, which helps me understand their feelings better.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ (ví dụ: 'crack to each other' không đúng, nên dùng 'clash with each other'). Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng câu ngắn gọn.

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with certain friends because our personalities clash. However, we always make up in the end.

× We usually chatting online through the media socials like Facebook, Instagram and sometimes lock it because like it's now one of the famous platform first right now.

✓ We usually chat online through social media like Facebook, Instagram and sometimes lock it because it's now one of the most famous platforms right now.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. After adverbs of frequency like 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'chat' instead of 'chatting'. Also, 'media socials' should be 'social media', and 'platform' should be plural 'platforms' to match the context. 'Lock it' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context, but since it does not fit the grammar problem list, it is omitted from correction.

× We usually chatting online through the media socials like Facebook, Instagram and sometimes lock it because like it's now one of the famous platform first right now.

✓ We usually chat online on social media like Facebook, Instagram and sometimes lock it because it's now one of the most famous platforms right now.

The preposition 'through' is incorrectly used with 'social media'. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to platforms like Facebook or Instagram.

× because like it's now one of the famous platform first right now.

✓ because it's now one of the most famous platforms right now.

The noun 'platform' should be plural 'platforms' because it is preceded by 'one of the', which requires a plural noun.

× Well, this is a little bit privacy, but as girl sometimes we talk about love and emotions for some other boys and of course we in our age for studying.

✓ Well, this is a little bit private, but as girls sometimes we talk about love and emotions for some other boys and of course we, at our age, study.

'Privacy' is a noun but the sentence requires an adjective 'private'. 'As girl' should be 'as girls' to match plural subject. 'We in our age for studying' is incorrect; it should be 'we, at our age, study' to correctly express the idea.

× Well, this is a little bit privacy, but as girl sometimes we talk about love and emotions for some other boys and of course we in our age for studying.

✓ Well, this is a little bit private, but as girls sometimes we talk about love and emotions about some other boys and of course we, at our age, study.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used with 'some other boys'; the correct preposition is 'about' when talking about topics.

× So we talk about assigns men and exams of course.

✓ So we talk about assignments and exams, of course.

'Assigns men' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'assignments'.

× Well, actually this is depends on the situations, but to be honest I would like to chat with a group of friend more than only one person, because when you have a group you will receive as many comments and advice you can.

✓ Well, actually this depends on the situation, but to be honest I would like to chat with a group of friends more than only one person, because when you have a group you will receive as many comments and advice as you can.

'This is depends' should be 'this depends' (verb agreement). 'Situations' should be singular 'situation' to match 'this'. 'A group of friend' should be 'a group of friends' (plural). Missing 'as' in 'as many comments and advice as you can'.

× because when you have a group you will receive as many comments and advice you can.

✓ because when you have a group you will receive as many comments and as much advice as you can.

'Advice' is an uncountable noun and should be quantified with 'as much' instead of 'as many'.

× Well, personally I would prefer to talk directly to the person.

✓ Well, personally I would prefer to talk directly with the person.

The preposition 'to' is less appropriate here; 'talk with' is more natural when referring to a conversation.

× I want to talk face to face more than through the social media platform because when you talk directly to a person, you can see their facial emotions like that.

✓ I want to talk face to face more than through social media platforms because when you talk directly to a person, you can see their facial expressions like that.

'Facial emotions' is incorrect; the correct term is 'facial expressions'. Also, 'the social media platform' should be plural 'social media platforms' or just 'social media'.

× Well, yeah, of course sometimes I do argue with the some certain friends because our personality sometimes crack to each other.

✓ Well, yeah, of course sometimes I do argue with some certain friends because our personalities sometimes clash with each other.

'The some certain friends' is incorrect; it should be 'some certain friends'. 'Personality' should be plural 'personalities' to match 'friends'. 'Crack to each other' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'clash with each other'.

× But it's OK, we all anyway in the in the final we always make it up to each other.

✓ But it's OK, we all, anyway, in the end, always make it up to each other.

'In the final' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in the end'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding commas for clarity.