聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте повторений и грамматических ошибок, используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because whenever I feel lonely or bored, talking to them cheers me up and makes me feel connected.

建議: Старайтесь использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова для логичности. Уточняйте детали, чтобы ответ был более содержательным.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about school assignments and homework, helping each other understand difficult exercises. Besides that, we sometimes discuss our personal relationships and daily life.

建議: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и грамматику. Используйте более разнообразную лексику и связывающие слова.

範例: To be honest, I prefer chatting with a group of people because it feels more comfortable, and I can catch up on news from different friends all at once in the group chat.

建議: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит ошибки. Следует четко выразить мысль, использовать правильную грамматику и связные слова.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to understand a person's emotions and intentions, which can be difficult through social media messages that sometimes make me feel uncomfortable.

建議: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить грамматику и использовать более формальный стиль. Добавьте связующие слова для плавности.

範例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes, usually due to differing opinions. However, we always communicate openly to resolve our issues because we care about each other and don't want to lose our friendship.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because every time I feel alone, all just bored, I always chat with my friends and they make me happy.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because every time I feel alone or just bored, I always chat with my friends and they make me happy.

The phrase 'all just bored' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'or just bored' to correctly express the feeling of being alone or bored. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I chat with my friends every day but usually we choose topics like school assignments or homework.

✓ I chat with my friends every day, but usually we choose topics like school assignments or homework.

A comma is needed before the conjunction 'but' when it connects two independent clauses to improve sentence structure and readability.

× We help each other to understand some exercise but also we can talk about our personal relationships or some.

✓ We help each other to understand some exercises, but we can also talk about our personal relationships or other things.

The sentence lacks proper punctuation and word order. A comma before 'but' is necessary, and 'also' should be placed after 'can' for correct adverb placement. 'Some exercise' should be plural 'some exercises' to match the context.

× To be honest, I prefer to chat with a group of people because for me it's more comfortable and also you can know news of your different friends at the same time in the group chat.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to chat with a group of people because for me it's more comfortable, and also you can get news from your different friends at the same time in the group chat.

The phrase 'know news of your different friends' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'get news from' to indicate receiving information. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate independent clauses.

× I prefer to communicate with people face to face because in social media you can understand a person who you're talking with.

✓ I prefer to communicate with people face to face because on social media you cannot understand the person you're talking to.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on social media' is the correct phrase. Also, the sentence meaning is improved by clarifying that understanding a person is difficult on social media. 'Talking with' is better as 'talking to' in this context.

× Don't write which make you feel uncomfortable.

✓ Don't write things that make you feel uncomfortable.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'things that' clarifies the object of 'write' and corrects the sentence structure.