聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "we rather than chatting we usually use texting" which is awkward. Try to use linking words to improve coherence and keep sentences shorter for clarity.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, but because we have busy lives, we usually text instead of having long conversations.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer linking. Also, avoid vague phrases like "It depends" without elaboration. Try to give a more structured response with specific examples.

範例: Usually, we chat about our daily activities or share amusing stories from work, such as when colleagues do something funny that we keep between us.

建議: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler sentence structures and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because one-on-one conversations allow us to discuss things in more depth and focus better.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors like "headache lifestyle" and "face to face have it own a fountain." Try to use correct expressions and clearer vocabulary. Also, organise your ideas logically with linking words.

範例: It depends. Because we are busy, social media is convenient for sharing news, but face-to-face communication is more personal and meaningful.

建議: Your answer is thoughtful but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrases like "put ourself into other shoes." Use correct idioms and plural forms. Also, try to make sentences more concise and natural.

範例: Yes, sometimes we argue, but since we've grown up, we're more open-minded and try to see things from others' perspectives and respect their opinions.

× Yes for sure. I love chatting with my friends but we do have a busy lifestyle therefore we only have limited time so we rather than chatting we usually use texting instead.

✓ Yes, for sure. I love chatting with my friends, but we have a busy lifestyle; therefore, we only have limited time, so rather than chatting, we usually use texting instead.

The original sentence incorrectly uses conjunctions and lacks proper punctuation, causing it to be a run-on sentence. Adding commas and semicolons clarifies the relationships between clauses and improves readability.

× You know, when the colleagues do something ridiculous or funny that we would keep it as a secret.

✓ You know, when colleagues do something ridiculous or funny, we keep it as a secret.

The definite article 'the' before 'colleagues' is unnecessary here because it refers to colleagues in general, not specific ones. Also, the sentence structure is improved by removing 'that' and adjusting the verb tense for clarity.

× In fact, I would prefer chatting with one friend instead of whole group of people since chatting one-on-one allowed us to discuss things more in depth and will be more will pay more attention in focus while we do.

✓ In fact, I would prefer chatting with one friend instead of a whole group of people since chatting one-on-one allows us to discuss things more in depth and pay more attention while we do.

The phrase 'whole group of people' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Also, verb tenses and phrasing were inconsistent; 'allowed' should be 'allows' to match the present preference, and redundant phrases were removed for clarity.

× It really depends, since we all have a headache lifestyle, we don't really have much time to hang out there for.

✓ It really depends, since we all have a hectic lifestyle, we don't really have much time to hang out.

The phrase 'headache lifestyle' is incorrect; 'hectic lifestyle' is the correct expression. Also, 'hang out there for' is awkward and unnecessary; 'hang out' suffices without additional prepositions.

× But of course face to face have it own a fountain.

✓ But of course, face-to-face has its own charm.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and vocabulary. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face', 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject, 'it own a fountain' is incorrect; 'its own charm' is a common expression meaning a unique appeal.

× Perhaps it's because we have all grown up and we're more open minded compared to our younger self.

✓ Perhaps it's because we have all grown up and we're more open-minded compared to our younger selves.

The pronoun 'self' should be plural 'selves' to agree with the plural subject 'we'. Also, 'open minded' should be hyphenated as 'open-minded' when used as an adjective.

× We know how to put ourself into other shoes, to understand different point of views and to respect others opinion.

✓ We know how to put ourselves into others' shoes, to understand different points of view, and to respect others' opinions.

The reflexive pronoun 'ourself' is incorrect; it should be 'ourselves' for the plural subject. Possessive forms require apostrophes: 'others' shoes' and 'others' opinions'. Also, 'point of views' should be 'points of view' as the plural form.