聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сіздің жауабыңызда көп 'umm' және 'uh' деген сөздер бар, олар сөйлеуді табиғи емес етеді. Жауабыңызды қысқартуға және нақтырақ, анық сөйлеуге тырысыңыз. Мысалы, артық сөздерді алып тастаңыз және ойыңызды нақты жеткізіңіз.

範例: No, I don't like chatting much. I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more genuine and meaningful.

建議: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлем құрылымы толық емес. Сөйлемдерді дұрыс құрылымдап, қосымша мәліметтерді байланыстыру үшін байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз.

範例: My friends and I usually chat about our daily lives. If there is a problem, we discuss it to find a solution.

建議: Жауабыңызда қайталанатын сөздер және грамматикалық қателер бар. Сөйлемдерді қысқартып, нақты және түсінікті етіп айтыңыз. Қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін 'because' сияқты сөздерді қолданыңыз.

範例: Chatting with a group can be challenging because everyone wants to share their opinions. Therefore, I prefer chatting with one friend as it is more enjoyable.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөздердің қайталануы және сөйлемдердің толық болмауы байқалады. Сөйлемдерді нақты және қысқа етіп құрастырыңыз, және байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows better understanding. Online chatting lacks the personal connection that real conversations have.

建議: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлемдер толық емес. Сөйлемдерді дұрыс құрылымдап, өткен шақты дұрыс қолданыңыз. Қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін 'because' және 'so' сияқты сөздерді қолданыңыз.

範例: I used to argue with my friends when I was 12 because we often disagreed. However, now I have grown up and realize that arguing is pointless, so I avoid it.

× Me and my friends usually chatting about what happens in our life and if there's some situation that we need to discuss, we discuss them.

✓ My friends and I usually chat about what happens in our lives and if there is some situation that we need to discuss, we discuss it.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used here; it should be the base form 'chat' to agree with the auxiliary 'usually'. Also, 'Me and my friends' should be 'My friends and I' for correct pronoun case and order. Additionally, 'life' should be plural 'lives' to match multiple people, and 'some situation' should be 'some situations' or 'a situation' for clarity.

× Chat with a group of people sometimes quite challenging because everyone want to express their comments or expressions about different kinds of situation.

✓ Chatting with a group of people is sometimes quite challenging because everyone wants to express their comments or expressions about different kinds of situations.

The verb 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'. Also, 'Chat' should be 'Chatting' to function as the subject of the sentence, and 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to match 'different kinds'.

× So I prefer chatting with one with one with only one friend because I find it more enjoyable.

✓ So I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find it more enjoyable.

The phrase 'with one with one with only one friend' is repetitive and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'with only one friend' for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because for me it's more meaningful when you have conversation in real life because in real life it also requires like a lot of understanding understanding understanding.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because for me it's more meaningful when you have a conversation in real life, as it also requires a lot of understanding.

The phrase 'have conversation' is missing the article 'a'. Also, the repetition of 'understanding' is unnecessary and should be removed. The sentence is improved by adding commas and connecting ideas properly.

× While chatting in online maybe it will be non.

✓ While chatting online, maybe there will be none.

The phrase 'in online' is incorrect; it should be 'online' without 'in'. Also, 'it will be non' is incorrect; 'there will be none' is the correct expression to indicate absence.

× I used to argue with friends because when I was 12 every chatting ended up with argue with my friends.

✓ I used to argue with friends because when I was 12, every chat ended up with an argument with my friends.

'Every chatting' is incorrect; 'every chat' is correct. 'Ended up with argue' should be 'ended up with an argument' to use the noun form. Also, a comma is needed after '12' for clarity.

× But now when I grow up I understand that it means nothing so I stopped to do this.

✓ But now that I have grown up, I understand that it means nothing, so I stopped doing this.

'When I grow up' should be 'now that I have grown up' to indicate completed action. 'Stopped to do this' is incorrect; it should be 'stopped doing this' because 'stop' is followed by a gerund when meaning to cease an action.