聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より簡潔で明確な文を使い、友達と話すことの理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because it makes me feel happy and supported. Talking with them helps me relax and share my thoughts.

建議: 内容が不明瞭で文が途中で終わっているため、話題を明確にし、文法的に正しい文章を作る練習が必要です。具体的な話題や理由を述べると良いでしょう。

範例: I usually chat with my friends about student life, such as our classes, exams, and hobbies. We also talk about the latest trends sometimes.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。グループで話す理由を明確にし、簡潔で正しい英語を使う練習をしましょう。

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of four or five friends because it creates lively conversations and friendly competition, which I enjoy.

建議: 理由を述べる際に文が繰り返されており、構造が不自然です。理由を明確にし、流暢で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand people's feelings better, and I find it more enjoyable than social media.

建議: 質問に対する答えが不明瞭で、文法的にも誤りがあります。議論することと口論することの違いを理解し、明確に答える練習をしましょう。

範例: No, I don't argue with my friends. Sometimes we have discussions about controversial topics, but we always respect each other's opinions.

× Yes, I like a talking with a friend, especially a close friend and because they allow me to and it is my successful and make me a happier and I I think a friend is very important. I feel a nostalgic.

✓ Yes, I like talking with friends, especially close friends, because they allow me to be successful and make me happier. I think friends are very important. I feel nostalgic.

'a talking' is incorrect; 'talking' is a gerund and does not need an article. 'a friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the general statement. 'they allow me to' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'allow me to be successful'. 'make me a happier' is incorrect; 'a' should be removed. 'I feel a nostalgic' is incorrect; 'nostalgic' is an adjective and does not take an article. Use 'I feel nostalgic' instead.

× I talking with friend about the.

✓ I talk with friends about various topics.

The verb 'talking' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'talk' to match the present tense. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to indicate general conversation.

× Student life and don't use your usual trend and so on. So I enjoyed talking with a friend about.

✓ I usually talk about student life, current trends, and so on. I enjoy talking with friends about these topics.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper quantifiers. 'Don't use your usual trend' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'A friend' should be plural 'friends' to indicate general conversation.

× I prefer to chat with you some friends, especially for or five friends because a talking among some peoples and make conversation and rivalry.

✓ I prefer to chat with some friends, especially four or five friends, because talking among several people makes the conversation lively and competitive.

'You some friends' is incorrect; 'some friends' is correct. 'For or five friends' should be 'four or five friends'. 'A talking' is incorrect; 'talking' without article is correct. 'Some peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is plural and does not take 's'.

× So I feel enjoyable and we do a talking with you as ever.

✓ So I feel happy and we always enjoy talking together.

'Feel enjoyable' is incorrect; 'feel happy' or 'enjoy' is correct. 'We do a talking' is incorrect; 'we talk' or 'we enjoy talking' is correct. 'With you as ever' is unclear and likely incorrect.

× I prefer to communicate with people face to face and because as as they can understand their feelings more than though I feel enjoyable with face to face communications so.

✓ I prefer to communicate with people face to face because they can understand each other's feelings better. I enjoy face-to-face communication.

The sentence has redundant words ('as as') and incorrect prepositions ('with face to face communications'). 'More than though' is incorrect; 'better' is appropriate. 'Feel enjoyable' is incorrect; 'enjoy' is correct.

× No, I didn't argue his friends.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends.

The question is general, so present tense 'don't argue' is appropriate. 'His friends' is incorrect; 'my friends' is correct. Also, 'argue' requires the preposition 'with'.

× What do I sometimes discuss with my friend and when I talk with them about the controversy topic?

✓ I sometimes discuss with my friends when we talk about controversial topics.

'What do I sometimes discuss' is incorrect question form; it should be a statement. 'My friend' and 'them' mismatch in number; both should be plural 'my friends' and 'we'. 'Controversy topic' should be 'controversial topics'.

× Like sometimes discussion, make up discussion and discuss.

✓ For example, sometimes we have discussions, make up after arguments, and discuss various topics.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. 'Like sometimes discussion' is incorrect; 'sometimes we have discussions' is correct. 'Make up discussion' is unclear; 'make up after arguments' is clearer.