聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然，建議簡化句子結構，避免重複表達，並使用更自然的連接詞來使回答更流暢。

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my feelings. I consider myself optimistic and outgoing, so talking with friends is enjoyable and uplifting.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤且表達不夠清晰，建議注意主詞單複數一致，並使用連接詞使句子更連貫，內容也可更具體。

範例: As a university student, I usually talk with my friends about our assignments and how to solve difficult problems. Besides that, we also share stories about our daily lives and relationships.

建議: 回答中有口語填充詞且部分表達不夠自然，建議減少口語語氣詞，並使用更自然的連接詞和詞彙來表達想法。

範例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it lets me focus on that person and share my feelings directly without worrying about others' opinions.

建議: 回答中有重複用詞和語法錯誤，建議簡化句子結構，避免重複，並使用更準確的詞彙來表達情感。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication with my boss, friends, and relatives because it helps me understand their feelings through expressions, which social media cannot fully convey.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，建議使用正確的動詞形式和更自然的表達方式，並提供更具體的例子。

範例: Yes, I have had some serious arguments with my friends because we have different opinions. Sometimes, we hold on to our own views and find it hard to understand each other.

× Yes, because I refer myself.

✓ Yes, because I refer to myself.

In English, the verb 'refer' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating the object of reference. The correct phrase is 'refer to myself' rather than 'refer myself'. (在英文中，動詞'refer'後面必須接介系詞'to'來表示參考的對象，因此正確用法是'refer to myself'，而非'refer myself')

× Since I'm a university students, I often chat the tasks that our professor gave us and figuring out the best solutions or some other methods to solve those homeworks and questions.

✓ Since I'm a university student, I often chat about the tasks that our professor gave us and figure out the best solutions or some other methods to solve those homework and questions.

The subject 'I' is singular, so 'students' should be singular 'student'. Also, 'chat' is usually followed by 'about' when indicating the topic. 'Figuring' should be 'figure' to maintain parallel verb structure. 'Homework' is an uncountable noun and does not take plural form. (主詞'I'是單數，故'students'應改為單數'student'。'chat'後面接話題時需加介系詞'about'。動詞需保持平行結構，故'figuring'改為'figure'。'homework'為不可數名詞，不可加複數形式)

× But personally, I will we will chat about our daily lives and some of the relationship between US and others.

✓ But personally, we will chat about our daily lives and some of the relationships between us and others.

The phrase 'I will we will' is redundant; only 'we will' is needed. 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match 'some of'. 'US' should be lowercase 'us' as a pronoun. ('I will we will'重複，應只用'we will'。'relationship'需用複數'relationships'以符合'some of'。'US'作為代名詞應小寫為'us')

× Somehow I prefer to chat with only one friend because it allows me to really emphasize uh on one P one person and I can directly share my feelings to he or she without carrying others eyesight or others perceptions about me.

✓ Somehow I prefer to chat with only one friend because it allows me to really emphasize on one person and I can directly share my feelings with him or her without carrying others' eyesight or others' perceptions about me.

The phrase 'emphasize uh on one P one person' is corrected to 'emphasize on one person' for clarity. The preposition with 'share' should be 'with' not 'to'. Pronouns 'he or she' should be 'him or her' as objects. Possessive form 'others' should be 'others'' to indicate possession. ('emphasize uh on one P one person'修正為'emphasize on one person'以清楚表達。'share'後接介系詞應為'with'而非'to'。代名詞作受詞時應用'him or her'。'others'表示所有格時應加撇號為'others'')

× Somehow I prefer to communicate face to face with my boss and friends or my relatives, since I think talking and talking face to face can really allows me to perceive the feelings and expressions of ones and also allows me to get those affections that can only exist in reality.

✓ Somehow I prefer to communicate face to face with my boss, friends, or my relatives, since I think talking face to face really allows me to perceive the feelings and expressions of others and also allows me to get those affections that can only exist in reality.

The phrase 'talking and talking face to face' is redundant; one 'talking' is enough. 'Can really allows' is incorrect; 'allows' alone suffices. 'Ones' should be 'others' to refer to other people. Commas added for clarity in listing. ('talking and talking face to face'重複，保留一個'talking'即可。'can really allows'語法錯誤，應用'allows'。'ones'應改為'others'指代他人。列舉時加逗號以清晰表達)

× Yeah, I have some really terrible argue experience with my friends before.

✓ Yeah, I have had some really terrible argument experiences with my friends before.

'Argue' is a verb; the noun form 'argument' is needed here. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'some'. The present perfect 'have had' is more appropriate to indicate past experiences relevant to now. ('argue'是動詞，此處需用名詞'argument'。'experience'需用複數'experiences'以符合'some'。使用現在完成式'have had'較適合表達過去經驗與現在的關聯)