聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Essayez de formuler une phrase principale claire et d'éviter les erreurs grammaticales. Par exemple, expliquez pourquoi vous aimez discuter avec vos amis en une phrase complète et ajoutez un détail de soutien avec un lien logique.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps us become closer. For example, we share our daily experiences, which strengthens our friendship.

建議: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez des phrases complètes et des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide et claire. Soyez plus précis dans vos exemples.

範例: I usually chat about my daily life and travel plans. For instance, I often tell my friends what I ate or what happened at work or school, but I prefer not to share negative news.

建議: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais manque de fluidité et de structure. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées et corrigez les erreurs grammaticales pour améliorer la clarté.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because group conversations can be stressful. Also, one-on-one chats allow me to share more detailed information.

建議: Votre réponse est difficile à comprendre à cause des erreurs grammaticales et du manque de clarté. Essayez de formuler une phrase principale claire et d'expliquer votre préférence avec un exemple précis.

範例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see the other person's expressions. For example, when I chat on social media, I miss these non-verbal cues.

建議: Votre réponse est courte et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez de développer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire et un détail de soutien, en utilisant des mots de liaison.

範例: I don't argue with my friends often because I want to keep our interactions positive. Therefore, I try to avoid conflicts whenever possible.

× I think the pro the process of chatting can make us more closer and I want to. Have a.

✓ I think the process of chatting can make us closer and I want to.

The phrase 'more closer' is incorrect because 'closer' is already a comparative adjective; adding 'more' is redundant. Also, 'pro the process' seems to be a typo and should be 'the process'. The sentence is corrected by removing 'pro' and 'more' before 'closer'.

× I usually check my daily life or where I have to travel.

✓ I usually talk about my daily life or where I have to travel.

The verb 'check' is not appropriate here; 'talk about' fits better when discussing topics of conversation. The original sentence misuses 'check' instead of 'talk about'.

× I always talk my friends about what about I eat today or what happened at my work or studies.

✓ I always talk to my friends about what I ate today or what happened at my work or studies.

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating the person spoken to. Also, 'what about I eat today' is incorrect; it should be 'what I ate today' to indicate past action. The preposition 'to' is necessary after 'talk'.

× I don't want to share the negative information to them.

✓ I don't want to share negative information with them.

The verb 'share' is followed by 'with' when indicating the person receiving the information, not 'to'. Also, 'the negative information' is better as 'negative information' in this context. The preposition 'with' is correct here.

× I don't prefer to chat with a group of people because it will make me feel stressful and I believe that I chat with only one friend. Can be more detailed about what I taught them information.

✓ I don't prefer to chat with a group of people because it makes me feel stressed and I believe that chatting with only one friend can be more detailed about what I tell them.

'Will make me feel stressful' is incorrect; 'stressful' describes a situation, not a feeling. The correct adjective is 'stressed'. Also, 'I chat with only one friend. Can be more detailed' is a sentence fragment; it should be combined properly. 'What I taught them information' is incorrect; it should be 'what I tell them'. Modal verb 'can' should be connected to the subject properly.

× Definitely, I prefer to communication face to face because I believe that the face that someone to appear is, well, in fact the conversation.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to communicate face to face because I believe that seeing someone's face is important in a conversation.

'Prefer to communication' is incorrect; the verb should be 'communicate'. The phrase 'the face that someone to appear is' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to 'seeing someone's face'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× For example, when I talk to social media, I maybe don't have another.

✓ For example, when I talk on social media, I may not have the same connection.

'Talk to social media' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on'. 'I maybe don't have another' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'I may not have the same connection' to convey the intended meaning. The sentence structure is improved.

× Not really often because I want our interaction be more positive so I will able to avoid some argue with my friends.

✓ Not very often because I want our interaction to be more positive, so I am able to avoid some arguments with my friends.

'I want our interaction be' is missing 'to' before 'be'. 'I will able to' is incorrect; it should be 'I am able to'. 'Some argue' should be 'some arguments' as a noun. Modal verb and sentence structure are corrected.