聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ lặp lại và tiếng ừ ừ không cần thiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn về nội dung bạn thường nói chuyện với bạn bè.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends daily. I usually use social media platforms like Facebook, Messenger, and Instagram to stay in touch. We often talk about our school experiences and share interesting stories.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về chủ đề bạn thường thảo luận với bạn bè.

範例: Usually, we chat about funny posts on social media and interesting events at school. Sometimes, we also share tips on how to manage our time better and improve our studies.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho sở thích của bạn.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows everyone to share their stories. This way, we can understand each other better compared to talking with just one person.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng tiếng ừ ừ và nói lắp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng sở thích của bạn và lý do kèm theo ví dụ cụ thể.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal. However, I use social media to keep in touch with relatives who live far away or for work purposes.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. For example, we discuss and question why certain things happen in the world, which helps us learn from each other.

× I uh, often just put my friend every day.

✓ I often just put my friends every day.

The verb 'put' is incorrectly used here; likely the student meant 'put' as 'putting' or 'contacting'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple people. Suggest using 'chat with my friends every day' for clarity.

× I used Facebook, messenger, Instagram and all of some other social media to chat with my friend.

✓ I use Facebook, Messenger, Instagram, and some other social media to chat with my friends.

The verb tense should be present simple 'use' to match the habitual action. 'Messenger' should be capitalized as a proper noun. 'All of some other' is incorrect; 'some other' is sufficient. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context.

× Uh, we often say talk about, umm, the, uh, some story as school or some.

✓ We often talk about some stories at school or other things.

The phrase 'say talk about' is incorrect; 'talk about' is sufficient. 'Some story as school' is incorrect; it should be 'some stories at school'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× As I mentioned before, we often chat about umm, the humor on social media or some story at school.

✓ As I mentioned before, we often chat about humor on social media or some stories at school.

'The humor' is better as 'humor' without 'the' in this context. 'Some story' should be plural 'some stories' to match the context.

× We, umm, often talk about some tips to improve, uh, time and school or talk.

✓ We often talk about some tips to improve time management and school performance.

The phrase 'improve time and school or talk' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It is corrected to 'improve time management and school performance' for clarity and correctness.

× In my opinion, I refer chatting with a group of people because I have a story, right?

✓ In my opinion, I prefer chatting with a group of people because I have stories to share.

'I refer chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer chatting'. 'I have a story' is better as 'I have stories' to match the context.

× So audible all the people that also have stories, so when we talk together, they can we can understand more about each other instead of talking with only one person.

✓ So all the people who also have stories can listen, so when we talk together, we can understand more about each other instead of talking with only one person.

'Audible' is incorrectly used; 'listen' or 'hear' is appropriate. The pronouns are corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Uh, I refer to communicate in person, umm, for social media, uh, I just use it for the work or when I'm talking with my relative because they live far from me.

✓ I prefer to communicate in person. For social media, I just use it for work or when I'm talking with my relatives because they live far from me.

'I refer to communicate' should be 'I prefer to communicate'. 'My relative' should be plural 'my relatives' to match the context.

× But when, when I talking with other people, I prefer to talk face to face with.

✓ But when I talk with other people, I prefer to talk face to face.

'When I talking' should be 'when I talk'. The phrase 'talk face to face with' is incomplete; 'talk face to face' is sufficient.

× Yes I do. I do it every day because I'm a student so I learn a lot of things and I have a lot of questions.

✓ Yes, I do. I do it every day because I'm a student, so I learn a lot of things and have a lot of questions.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs commas for clarity. No tense error here; the explanation is to improve punctuation.

× So my friend is uh, I often chat with them to communicate about why is this happen?

✓ So my friends, I often chat with them to communicate about why this happens.

'My friend is' should be 'my friends'. The question 'why is this happen?' is incorrect; it should be 'why this happens' in reported speech.

× Why is it uh, appear in the earth or umm, we can do it.

✓ Why it appears on the earth, or if we can do it.

'Why is it appear' is incorrect; it should be 'why it appears'. 'In the earth' should be 'on the earth'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.