聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share ideas and experiences. We often talk about various topics non-stop, which helps strengthen our friendship.

建議: Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases and focus on clear, specific examples. Use linking words to organize your answer logically and keep it natural.

範例: Usually, we chat about daily life, such as what we are doing, eating, or watching. We also discuss our future plans, which can make our conversations last from a few minutes to several hours.

建議: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing or incorrect words. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide specific reasons for your preference using appropriate vocabulary.

範例: I prefer chatting with a small group of close friends because I trust them and feel comfortable sharing anything with them.

建議: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to compare options and provide specific reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see emotions and share feelings directly, which is often missing in social media interactions.

建議: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use clear vocabulary to distinguish between arguing and debating, and provide a concise explanation.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends. Instead, we have healthy debates where I share my ideas and concerns respectfully.

× I have lots of friends and I can chat with them for an hour.

✓ I have lots of friends and I can chat with them for hours.

The phrase 'for an hour' suggests a fixed duration, but the context implies chatting can last longer or multiple times. Using 'for hours' better expresses the idea of chatting for extended periods or multiple occasions.

× We can discuss any topic any moment, anything like non-stop.

✓ We can discuss any topic at any moment, anything like non-stop.

The correct preposition to indicate a specific time is 'at' rather than 'any moment' alone. 'At any moment' is the proper phrase to express any point in time.

× I can check in Allegopic, for example, We can discuss a wide range of topics from like daily life, what we are doing, what we are eating to what we watch and what are the future plans.

✓ I can check in Allegopic, for example. We can discuss a wide range of topics like daily life, what we are doing, what we are eating, what we watch, and what our future plans are.

The phrase 'from like daily life ... to' is awkward and incorrect. It's better to use 'like' to list examples without 'from' and 'to'. Also, the sentence was a run-on and needed to be split for clarity. The phrase 'what are the future plans' should be 'what our future plans are' to maintain correct word order.

× Actually, I have limited group of Piku that I consider my prey and those whom I considered my prey, they are my best friend.

✓ Actually, I have a limited group of people that I consider my peers, and those whom I consider my peers are my best friends.

The phrase 'limited group' requires an article 'a'. 'Piku' and 'prey' seem to be errors; likely intended 'people' and 'peers'. Also, 'considered' should be present tense 'consider' to match the context. 'Best friend' should be plural 'best friends' to agree with 'those'.

× I prefer to chat with them with that certain group of people whom I trust.

✓ I prefer to chat with that certain group of people whom I trust.

The phrase 'chat with them with that certain group' is redundant and awkward. It's clearer to say 'chat with that certain group'.

× Communicating face to face is the best thing than by social media because uh, we can see their emotion, we can share our feelings.

✓ Communicating face to face is better than by social media because, uh, we can see their emotions and share our feelings.

The phrase 'the best thing than' is incorrect; 'better than' is the correct comparative form. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context.

× Social media can be, cannot be such a transparent than communicating festivities.

✓ Social media cannot be as transparent as communicating face to face.

The original sentence is confusing and incorrect. The correct comparative structure is 'cannot be as transparent as'. 'Communicating festivities' is unclear; likely intended 'communicating face to face'.

× I don't argue with flame often, but, uh, when there is this agreement, I normally, uh, give my ideas and the issues that I'm concerned, but I don't uh, much argue with the friends.

✓ I don't argue with friends often, but, uh, when there is disagreement, I normally, uh, give my ideas and express the issues that I'm concerned about, but I don't, uh, argue much with my friends.

'Flame' is incorrect; should be 'friends'. 'Agreement' should be 'disagreement' to make sense in context. 'The issues that I'm concerned' is incomplete; should be 'issues that I'm concerned about'. 'Much argue' is incorrect word order; 'argue much' is better. 'The friends' should be 'my friends' for correct possessive pronoun.

× Yes, we can debate. We can discuss about the situation or the things.

✓ Yes, we can debate. We can discuss the situation or the things.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Saying 'discuss about' is incorrect.