聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and clear. Use correct grammar like 'didn't really know' instead of 'didn't really knew'. Also, start with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two supporting details.

範例: I don't really enjoy chatting with friends because I find it hard to express myself and it takes a lot of my time. Sometimes, I don't know what to say, which makes the conversation difficult for me.

建議: Your answer covers the topic but could be clearer and more structured. Avoid repeating phrases like 'most of the time'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples.

範例: My friends and I usually chat about our daily lives, such as our jobs and studies. For example, we often discuss our plans for the day or interesting things that happened recently.

建議: Good clear preference expressed. To improve, avoid repeating 'for me' multiple times and use linking words to make your answer smoother. Also, correct phrases like 'hard time experience expressing' to 'hard time expressing'.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I find it easier to express myself. In a group, I feel uncomfortable sharing personal details, so having a trusted friend is better for me.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but some grammar mistakes and unclear words like 'more sophistically'. Try to use simpler, correct words and organize your answer with linking words. Also, avoid repeating 'I feel' too much.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express emotions better. Although I find chatting in person difficult, I rarely use social media, so face-to-face is easier for me.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know'. Also, clarify your ideas and use linking words to connect sentences. Try to explain your feelings more clearly.

範例: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I dislike conflicts. However, if they correct me when I am wrong, I accept it even though it makes me feel a bit uncomfortable.

× I had really hard time communicating or saying things to my friends and I personally didn't really enjoy them because it consumed a lot of my time and effort chatting about things that I didn't really knew

✓ I had a really hard time communicating or saying things to my friends and I personally didn't really enjoy them because it consumed a lot of my time and effort chatting about things that I didn't really know

The verb 'knew' is the past tense of 'know', but after 'didn't', the base form 'know' should be used. Also, 'had really hard time' is missing an article 'a'. English (Nepal): 'didn't' पछि क्रियाको आधार रूप प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ, त्यसैले 'knew' होइन 'know' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ। साथै 'had really hard time' मा 'a' लेख्नुपर्छ।

× I didn't really knew what to say or how to do

✓ I didn't really know what to say or how to do

After 'didn't', the verb should be in base form 'know' not past tense 'knew'. English (Nepal): 'didn't' पछि क्रियाको आधार रूप प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ, त्यसैले 'knew' होइन 'know' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× I personally didn't really enjoy them because it consumed a lot of my time and effort chatting about things that I didn't really knew

✓ I personally didn't really enjoy it because it consumed a lot of my time and effort chatting about things that I didn't really know

'Enjoy' here refers to 'chatting' which is singular, so 'them' should be 'it'. English (Nepal): 'enjoy' को विषयवस्तु एकवचन छ भने 'them' होइन 'it' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× Well, for me and my friends, we usually most of the time chat about things in our daily life, things like our jobs, our studies and kind of activities that we do in a day or night

✓ Well, for me and my friends, we usually most of the time chat about things in our daily lives, things like our jobs, our studies and kinds of activities that we do in a day or night

'Life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people. Also, 'kind of activities' should be 'kinds of activities' to match plural. English (Nepal): बहुवचन व्यक्तिहरूको लागि 'life' लाई 'lives' र 'kind of activities' लाई बहुवचन 'kinds of activities' बनाउनुपर्छ।

× Most of the time we really chat for a really long time since I'm not really a good speaker

✓ Most of the time we really chat for a really long time since I'm not really good at speaking

'Good speaker' is a noun phrase but here 'good at speaking' is more appropriate to express skill. English (Nepal): 'good speaker' भन्दा 'good at speaking' प्रयोग गर्दा क्षमता देखाउन उपयुक्त हुन्छ।

× I generally have a really hard time experience expressing myself in a group of people

✓ I generally have a really hard time expressing myself in a group of people

'Hard time experience expressing' is incorrect; 'hard time expressing' is correct. English (Nepal): 'hard time experience expressing' गलत छ, 'hard time expressing' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× I prefer having one friend that I can trust, rather than a group of friends you know, with whom I really have hard time chatting to

✓ I prefer having one friend that I can trust, rather than a group of friends, you know, with whom I really have a hard time chatting

Missing article 'a' before 'hard time' and avoid ending sentence with preposition 'to'. English (Nepal): 'hard time' अघि 'a' लेख्नुपर्छ र वाक्य अन्त्यमा 'to' नलगाउनुपर्छ।

× Well for me I have really hard time chatting face to face, but it is even more harder chatting on social media as I do not use social media most of the time

✓ Well for me I have a really hard time chatting face to face, but it is even harder chatting on social media as I do not use social media most of the time

'Hard time' needs article 'a'. 'More harder' is incorrect; 'harder' alone is correct. English (Nepal): 'hard time' अघि 'a' लेख्नुपर्छ र 'more harder' होइन 'harder' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× I feel chatting face to face can bring up a lot of emotion and I can share my thoughts more easily and more sophistically

✓ I feel chatting face to face can bring up a lot of emotion and I can share my thoughts more easily and more sophisticatedly

'Sophistically' is not a correct adverb; 'sophisticatedly' is the correct form. English (Nepal): 'sophistically' गलत छ, 'sophisticatedly' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× Well most of the time since I really hate arguing or having you know things to argue about, I generally hate them

✓ Well most of the time since I really hate arguing or having, you know, things to argue about, I generally hate it

'Arguing' is singular activity, so pronoun should be 'it' not 'them'. English (Nepal): 'arguing' एकवचन हो, त्यसैले 'them' होइन 'it' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× But there are times I do agree when my friends are doing something wrong and are trying to correct me

✓ But there are times I do disagree when my friends are doing something wrong and are trying to correct me

'Agree' is incorrect in context; 'disagree' fits meaning better. English (Nepal): यहाँ 'agree' होइन 'disagree' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ किनभने वाक्यको अर्थ त्यही हो।

× I feel it makes me feel less organized and I just feel really under

✓ I feel it makes me feel less organized and I just feel really down

'Feel really under' is incomplete and incorrect; 'feel really down' is correct expression. English (Nepal): 'feel really under' गलत छ, 'feel really down' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।