聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding hesitations and grammatical errors. Use a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add a specific reason or example to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts and feelings with them.

建議: Make your answer more organized and coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structures. Provide specific examples of topics you discuss to enrich your response.

範例: We usually chat about our work, personal experiences, and daily life. For example, we often talk about how we can improve our daily routines.

建議: Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clear reason for your preference.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one close friend because it allows us to have a more meaningful and focused conversation.

建議: Complete your sentences and avoid trailing off. Use linking words to contrast your preferences and explain your reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for better social interaction. However, if the person is far away, I use social media to stay in touch.

建議: Try to speak more fluently and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to explain the context and the nature of the arguments clearly.

範例: Yes, we sometimes argue about specific topics, like basketball, especially when we support opposing teams. However, these arguments are friendly and fun.

× Certainly, uh, chatting with friends help me, helps me, uh, release my, uh, emotional shares my ideas. MMM.

✓ Certainly, uh, chatting with friends helps me release my emotions and share my ideas.

The subject 'chatting with friends' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help'. Also, the sentence was fragmented and unclear; it was corrected to properly connect ideas and use the correct verb forms.

× The usual topic, uh, we have, uh, more about work, uh, our experiences, our, uh, life, uh, and see, for example, uh, what, what are the improvements we make on our daily?

✓ The usual topics we have are more about work, our experiences, our life, and, for example, what improvements we make daily.

The phrase 'discussing about' is incorrect; 'discussing' does not require 'about'. Also, 'on our daily' is incorrect; it should be 'daily' or 'in our daily lives'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× I'm inclined to say that I'm more comfortable chatting with only one person, especially one of my close closest friend. For example. Uh, we can have a talk.

✓ I'm inclined to say that I'm more comfortable chatting with only one person, especially one of my closest friends. For example, we can have a talk.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because 'one of my closest friends' refers to one member of a group. Also, 'close closest' is redundant; 'closest' alone is sufficient.

× I prefer to, uh, meet someone, uh, face to face, uh, because I think it, it's important to socially interact with someone. However, if the person I'm communicating with is geographically away from me, so.

✓ I prefer to meet someone face to face because I think it's important to socially interact with someone. However, if the person I'm communicating with is geographically far from me, then I use other means.

The sentence was incomplete and had unnecessary fillers. 'Geographically away from me' is awkward; 'geographically far from me' is better. The sentence was completed to avoid fragment and improve clarity.

× Uh, yes, I think, uh, we do argue a lot on specific, uh, topics. For example, uh, if we are discussing about basketball and we have opposing teams, uh, teams that, uh, we support. So we do argue, but in a good.

✓ Yes, I think we do argue a lot on specific topics. For example, if we are discussing basketball and we support opposing teams, we do argue, but in a good way.

The phrase 'discussing about' is incorrect; 'discussing' should not be followed by 'about'. Also, 'in a good' is incomplete; it should be 'in a good way' to complete the thought.