聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現を避けるために、より簡潔で正確な文を心がけましょう。例えば、"When I go to university"は現在の習慣を表すために"When I am at university"や"At university"の方が自然です。

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. At university, I often talk with them during class breaks because it helps me relax and feel happier.

建議: 内容は理解できますが、文法ミスや繰り返しがあり、より具体的な説明が必要です。例えば、"I chat with chat about"は誤りで、"I chatted about"が正しいです。また、具体的な話題をもう少し詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

範例: I usually talk about various topics with my friends, mostly daily life matters. For example, yesterday I chatted with a friend about our future career plans.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。"Greater situation"は不自然で、"group setting"などの表現を使いましょう。また、理由を明確にし、文をつなげる接続詞を使うと良いです。

範例: Honestly, I like both situations. However, now I prefer chatting in groups because I am studying French and need to practice English with my friends. Although, I find it challenging to speak in a group in English.

建議: 回答は明確で自然ですが、"I believe it that it is kind of difficult"の部分は冗長なので簡潔にしましょう。また、接続詞"because"の後に理由を具体的に述べると良いです。

範例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it's often hard to understand people's feelings through social media. Therefore, I like to meet and talk with my friends or family in person.

建議: 文法の誤りがあり、"In most situation"は"In most situations"が正しいです。また、"I agreed"は現在形の"I agree"にするべきです。より自然な表現に改善しましょう。

範例: No, I have never argued with my friends because I want to avoid conflicts. In most situations, I agree with them, but sometimes I share a different opinion.

× So for example yesterday I chat with chat about my future jobs with my friend.

✓ So for example yesterday I chatted about my future jobs with my friend.

The sentence refers to a past event ('yesterday'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Chat' should be changed to 'chatted' to correctly indicate past tense.

× Honestly I like both situation.

✓ Honestly I like both situations.

The word 'situation' should be plural 'situations' because 'both' refers to two or more items, requiring a plural noun.

× However now I prefer. Greater situation because I'm currently studying in French now, so I have to chat with my friends in English.

✓ However now I prefer a greater situation because I'm currently studying in French, so I have to chat with my friends in English.

The sentence is fragmented and missing an article before 'greater situation'. Also, 'Greater situation' is unclear; adding 'a' makes it grammatically correct. The phrase 'studying in French now' is better without the second 'now' to avoid redundancy.

× I'm not good at chat in the group in English.

✓ I'm not good at chatting in the group in English.

After the phrase 'good at', the verb should be in the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'chat' should be changed to 'chatting'.

× I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because I believe it that it is kind of difficult to confirm and understand what people are thinking via social media, so I want to meet and chat with my friends or family.

✓ I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because I believe that it is kind of difficult to confirm and understand what people are thinking through social media, so I want to meet and chat with my friends or family.

The preposition 'via' is less appropriate here; 'through' is more commonly used when referring to communication methods. Also, 'I believe it that it' is redundant; 'I believe that it' is correct.

× In most situation I agreed with my friend and sometimes I give another opinion of my friends.

✓ In most situations I agree with my friends and sometimes I give another opinion to my friends.

'Situation' should be plural 'situations' because 'most' refers to multiple instances. 'Agreed' should be present tense 'agree' to match the habitual action. 'Another opinion of my friends' should be 'another opinion to my friends' to correctly express giving an opinion.