聊天— Part 1 評分報告

× Uh, definitely yes. Uh, a big part of the reason go to the fact that umm, it's make me to feel happy and relaxing uh, as a result, uh, I really like chatting with my friends.

✓ Uh, definitely yes. Uh, a big part of the reason goes to the fact that it makes me feel happy and relaxed. As a result, I really like chatting with my friends.

The verb 'go' should be in third person singular form 'goes' to agree with the singular subject 'a big part'. 'It's make' should be corrected to 'it makes' for subject-verb agreement and correct verb form. 'To feel' is unnecessary after 'makes me'; the verb should be followed directly by the base verb. 'Relaxing' should be changed to 'relaxed' to correctly describe the feeling.

× I usually just greet my friends about everything except for example our studying in my, our friends in our class, our in our school. The main reason for that is that me I.

✓ I usually just greet my friends about everything, for example, our studying, our friends in our class, and our school. The main reason for that is me.

The phrase 'except for example' is incorrect; 'for example' is the correct phrase to introduce examples. The sentence structure is unclear and fragmented; adding commas and conjunctions improves clarity. 'That me I' is incorrect; it should be 'that is me' or simply 'me'.

× Uh, I prefer to chat with a group of people, uh, to only run friends. The married and father did that, Umm, it's make me feel happy and, uh, extroverts, uh, when I trust, uh, just in a group of people, uh, other result, uh.

✓ Uh, I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than only one friend. The main reason is that it makes me feel happy and extroverted when I trust just a group of people. As a result, uh...

'To only run friends' is incorrect; it should be 'rather than only one friend'. 'The married and father did that' is unclear and likely incorrect; replaced with 'The main reason is that'. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Extroverts' should be 'extroverted' as an adjective describing the feeling. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring improves clarity.

× I prefer to communicating face to face to a VR social media. The simple reason for that is make me feel comfortable in more happy than uh, trusting, trusting, uh, on social media as a result, umm.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face rather than via social media. The simple reason is that it makes me feel more comfortable and happier than trusting social media. As a result, umm...

'Prefer to communicating' is incorrect; 'prefer communicating' or 'prefer to communicate' is correct. 'To a VR social media' is incorrect; 'via social media' is appropriate. 'Make me feel comfortable in more happy' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel more comfortable and happier'. Repetition of 'trusting' is unnecessary and confusing.

× Uh, kinder, uh, but sometimes I argue with my friends. Umm, I remember umm umm, when I and my friend in grade 6, umm, we are, we are, we argued, uh, together about.

✓ Uh, kind of, but sometimes I argue with my friends. I remember when my friend and I were in grade 6, we argued together about something.

'Kinder' should be 'kind of' as a correct expression. 'I and my friend' should be 'my friend and I' for correct pronoun order. 'We are, we are, we argued' is incorrect; 'we were' is past tense to match 'argued'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'about something' completes the thought.