聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp từ và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ "relax" và chú ý đến thì động từ (ví dụ: "enjoyed" nên là "enjoy"). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and unwind. We often talk about our daily lives and share interesting stories when we have free time, which makes me feel closer to them.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và số nhiều (ví dụ: "This conversations" nên là "These conversations"). Hãy chú ý sử dụng đúng số nhiều và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: We usually chat about various topics such as life, family, and work. For example, I often talk about my husband and babies, and we share our experiences and challenges related to parenting or our jobs. These conversations help us stay connected and support each other.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn thay vì thì hiện tại hoàn thành "I've preferred" nên là "I prefer" để phù hợp với câu hỏi. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu mở rộng để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

範例: I prefer to chat with only one friend because I find it challenging to keep up with conversations in a group. When many people talk at once, it's easy to miss important points or feel left out. Therefore, talking one-on-one allows me to focus better and have a more meaningful and relaxed conversation.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "allow" nên là "allows", câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh). Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời, sử dụng thì đúng và tránh câu bị bỏ dở. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication when talking with close friends or family members because it feels more personal and allows me to better understand their emotions through facial expressions and tone of voice. However, when interacting with people I'm not very close to, I usually use social media for convenience.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: "best friend" nên là "best friends", "has" nên là "have", "equipment" không đúng nghĩa). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Absolutely yes. Even though we are best friends and get along very well, we sometimes have disagreements. For example, we might argue about small things like plans and opinions, but these arguments usually help us understand each other better.

× I really enjoyed chatting with my friends because I think it's a great way to relax and relax straight.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I think it's a great way to relax and unwind.

The sentence mixes past tense 'enjoyed' with present tense 'think'. Since the statement is about a general preference, present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate. Also, 'relax straight' is incorrect; 'unwind' is a better choice to express relaxation.

× We usually talk about our daily life and share interesting story when we have free time, which help me feel closer to them.

✓ We usually talk about our daily lives and share interesting stories when we have free time, which helps me feel closer to them.

'Life' should be plural 'lives' to match 'our'. 'Story' should be plural 'stories' because it refers to multiple instances. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'which' referring to the whole clause.

× This conversations have us stay connected and support each other.

✓ These conversations help us stay connected and support each other.

'Conversations' is plural, so the demonstrative pronoun should be 'these' not 'this'. Also, 'have us stay' is incorrect; 'help us stay' is the correct collocation.

× I've preferred to chat with only one friend because I find it challenging to keep up with conversation in a group.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I find it challenging to keep up with conversation in a group.

'I've preferred' (present perfect) is incorrect here because the preference is current and ongoing; simple present 'I prefer' is appropriate.

× I prefer face to face communication when talking with a close friend or family member because it feels more personal and allow me to better understand their emotion through facial expression and honest voice.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication when talking with a close friend or family member because it feels more personal and allows me to better understand their emotions through facial expressions and honest voice.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'Allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Emotion' and 'expression' should be plural to match the context.

× However, when I need to interact with people I'm not very close or with people I'm not very get along.

✓ However, when I need to interact with people I'm not very close to or people I don't get along with,

The sentence is incomplete and has incorrect structure. 'Close' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Get along' needs auxiliary 'do' and preposition 'with' to be correct.

× Even though we are best friend and outstanding either very well, we sometimes has disagreement.

✓ Even though we are best friends and get along very well, we sometimes have disagreements.

'Best friend' should be plural 'best friends' to match 'we'. 'Has' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject 'we'. 'Disagreement' should be plural 'disagreements' to indicate multiple instances.

× Even though we are best friend and outstanding either very well, we sometimes has disagreement.

✓ Even though we are best friends and get along very well, we sometimes have disagreements.

'Outstanding either very well' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'get along very well' to express good relationship.

× For example, we might argue about small things like plans and opinion, but this equipment usually helps us understand each other better.

✓ For example, we might argue about small things like plans and opinions, but this usually helps us understand each other better.

'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match 'small things'. 'This equipment' is incorrect; 'this' alone refers to the situation or process. 'Equipment' is unrelated here.