聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is a fun way to share about our daily lives and family. We usually talk when we have free time, which helps us stay connected.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh hoặc không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I usually chat about cars, games, or going to the gym because these are my interests. For example, last time at a cafe, my friend told me that a game we play is very challenging.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: I am an introvert, so I find it difficult to chat with many people. Therefore, I prefer talking with just one close friend because it feels more comfortable.

建議: Bạn nên cố gắng trả lời câu hỏi ngay cả khi không hiểu rõ, bạn có thể yêu cầu người hỏi nói lại hoặc giải thích, nhưng tốt nhất là trả lời trực tiếp để thể hiện khả năng giao tiếp.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal and I can understand emotions better.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, sometimes we argue because we have different opinions. For example, we might disagree about where to go or what to eat for lunch or dinner, but we always try to find a compromise.

× Just call I always chatting with my friend when we are have free time because it's have a lot of fun can share about our daily life or family member and other things.

✓ I always chat with my friends when we have free time because it's a lot of fun to share about our daily life, family members, and other things.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'chatting' instead of the base verb 'chat' after 'always'. Also, 'Just call I' is incorrect and removed for clarity. 'We are have' is incorrect; it should be 'we have'. 'It's have' should be 'it's' or 'it has'. The sentence structure is corrected to use proper verb forms and clearer phrasing.

× 'Cause I'm a boy, so I always chatting about a car, games or gym.

✓ 'Cause I'm a boy, so I always chat about cars, games, or the gym.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used after 'always'; it should be the base form 'chat'. Also, 'a car' should be plural 'cars' to match the general topics. 'Gym' should be preceded by 'the' when referring to the activity place.

× For example, when I was at cafe I'm my friend always saying about the game is very hard, which is pretty.

✓ For example, when I was at the cafe, my friend was always saying that the game was very hard, which is true.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'at cafe' needs the article 'the'. 'I'm my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'my friend'. 'Always saying about' should be 'was always saying that'. 'Which is pretty' is unclear; 'which is true' fits better. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Not really because I am an introvert so chatting with people with with less my close friend is very kind of difficult for me, so I prefer chatting with my friend group.

✓ Not really, because I am an introvert, so chatting with people, especially with fewer close friends, is kind of difficult for me. Therefore, I prefer chatting with my friend group.

The phrase 'with with less my close friend' is incorrect. It should be 'with fewer close friends' to correctly use the comparative quantifier and preposition. The sentence is also split for clarity and better flow.

× Can you preface the question for me?

✓ Can you please repeat the question for me?

The phrase 'preface the question' is incorrect in this context. The student likely meant to ask for the question to be repeated or clarified. Using 'Can you please repeat the question for me?' is more appropriate.

× Yeah, because sometimes we're not in the same way. So we had to agree to agree some the problem such as where to go out or what to eat in the lunch or dinner.

✓ Yeah, because sometimes we don't see things the same way. So we have to agree on some problems, such as where to go out or what to eat for lunch or dinner.

'We're not in the same way' is unclear; 'we don't see things the same way' is better. 'We had to agree to agree some the problem' is incorrect; it should be 'we have to agree on some problems'. 'In the lunch or dinner' should be 'for lunch or dinner'. The tense is adjusted to present to match the ongoing nature of the situation.