聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên. Bạn nên nói rõ chủ đề bạn thích nói chuyện và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my two best friends, especially about funny things or topics related to relationships and friendships.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: We usually talk about funny things or relationships. Sometimes we argue, but we always make up afterwards and value our friendship even more.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi số nhiều.

範例: I prefer chatting with my two best friends rather than a large group because in a big group, I sometimes feel isolated. Talking with just two friends is more comfortable for me.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là cách dùng động từ và danh từ. Từ 'structural media' không phù hợp, nên dùng 'social media'. Hãy làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I prefer communicating face-to-face rather than via social media because face-to-face conversations are deeper and more meaningful.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý đến số nhiều và thì của động từ. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Definitely yes, we sometimes have arguments, but afterwards we make up and apologize to each other to strengthen our friendship.

× Yes, I do like chatting with friends, especially with my two best friend with something just about hilarious thing or maybe relationship or friends or lover.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with friends, especially with my two best friends about something just about hilarious, or maybe relationships, friends, or lovers.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with 'two best'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'Relationship', 'friends', and 'lover' should be plural or consistent in form to list topics correctly.

× We always talk about funny thing or something like relationship or others friendship.

✓ We always talk about funny things or something like relationships or other friendships.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'funny'. 'Relationship' and 'friendship' should be plural to match the context of multiple topics. 'Others' should be 'other' as an adjective modifying 'friendships'.

× It sometimes will be an argument but after all we will make up and cherish this relationship more.

✓ Sometimes there will be an argument, but after all, we make up and cherish this relationship more.

The modal 'will' is unnecessary with 'sometimes'. Using 'there will be' is more natural. Also, 'make up' and 'cherish' are habitual actions, so present simple is appropriate.

× I prefer chatting with my two best friends instead of a large group of friends because when I talk to a group of friend, I will be isolated from them and chatting with my two best friends will be more comfortable with me.

✓ I prefer chatting with my two best friends instead of a large group of friends because when I talk to a group of friends, I feel isolated from them, and chatting with my two best friends is more comfortable for me.

'Group of friend' should be 'group of friends' to be plural. 'Will be' is changed to 'is' to express a general preference. 'More comfortable with me' should be 'more comfortable for me'.

× I'm fond of communicate face to face rather than via structural media 'cause when we have a face to face interaction, the conversation will be deeper and meaningful for us to talk about.

✓ I'm fond of communicating face to face rather than via social media because when we have face-to-face interaction, the conversation is deeper and more meaningful for us to talk about.

After 'fond of', the verb should be in the '-ing' form: 'communicating'. 'Structural media' is incorrect; it should be 'social media'. 'Will be' is changed to present simple 'is' to express general truth. 'More meaningful' is the correct comparative form.

× Definitely yes, we sometime have an argument, but after that we will make up and apologize to each other to cherish this companion more.

✓ Definitely yes, we sometimes have an argument, but after that, we make up and apologize to each other to cherish this companionship more.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Will make up' is changed to present simple 'make up' to express habitual action. 'Companion' is a noun meaning a person; 'companionship' is the correct noun for the relationship.