聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and shows enthusiasm, but avoid using idioms like 'bending their ears' and 'shoot breeze' which may not be clear to all listeners. Also, try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and avoid calling topics 'useless' as it sounds negative. Keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and forget about stress. We often talk about everyday things and share our thoughts, which makes me feel happy.

建議: Good structure and content. However, try to use linking words like 'for instance' or 'on the other hand' to make your answer more coherent. Also, correct small grammar mistakes such as 'my with my school friends' to 'with my school friends'.

範例: I have different groups of friends from school and college. For instance, with my school friends, I usually talk about our school memories and future plans. On the other hand, with my office friends, we discuss work-related topics.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, start with a direct topic sentence and use linking words like 'because' properly. Also, avoid repeating 'love' twice in the same sentence. Try to be more concise.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because it allows us to share different opinions and have lively discussions, which makes the conversation more enjoyable.

建議: Good answer with clear preference and reason. To improve, use more natural phrases like 'I find it easier to understand emotions' instead of 'reasonable to see emotions that are flowing out'. Also, avoid repeating 'face to face' twice in the same sentence.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to understand a person's emotions and feelings when I can see their expressions.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words like 'uh' and some unclear phrases such as 'choose or to stay on all sides of the team'. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words like 'for example' effectively.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, we support different football teams and often debate passionately to defend our favourite teams.

× I like bending their ears

✓ I like bending their ears

The phrase 'bending their ears' is an idiomatic expression meaning to talk to someone at length. It is correctly used here, so no correction is needed.

× I love to shoot breeze with them

✓ I love to shoot the breeze with them

The correct idiomatic expression is 'shoot the breeze', which means to chat casually. The article 'the' is necessary here to make the phrase correct.

× For example my with my school friends I usually talk about school memories and or plans in the future

✓ For example, with my school friends I usually talk about school memories and/or plans for the future

The phrase 'and or' should be written as 'and/or' to indicate either or both options. Also, 'plans in the future' is better expressed as 'plans for the future' to correctly use the preposition.

× while with office friends we talk more about official stuff

✓ while with office friends we talk more about official stuff

The sentence is grammatically correct with appropriate preposition use, so no correction is needed.

× Me personally, I love it when all my friends come together and we have a group because we love to give our opinions and discuss them so it's more fun when I have more people around me

✓ Personally, I love it when all my friends come together and we have a group because we love to give our opinions and discuss them, so it's more fun when I have more people around me

Starting a sentence with 'Me personally' is incorrect; 'Personally' alone is sufficient and grammatically correct. Also, adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence clarity.

× I don't mind speaking face to face or on social media

✓ I don't mind speaking face to face or via social media

The preposition 'via' is more appropriate than 'on' when referring to communication through social media platforms.

× I find it reasonable to see emotions that are flowing out of a person while speaking

✓ I find it reasonable to see emotions that are coming from a person while speaking

The phrase 'flowing out of a person' is awkward; 'coming from a person' is a clearer and more natural expression in this context.

× Certainly I argue with my friends on, uh, things that we don't have common opinions on

✓ Certainly, I argue with my friends about things on which we don't have common opinions

The preposition 'about' is more appropriate than 'on' when referring to topics of argument. Also, 'things that we don't have common opinions on' is better expressed as 'things on which we don't have common opinions' for formal correctness.

× We support different teams and we, uh, tend to choose or to stay on all sides of the team so as to glorify our team more

✓ We support different teams and we tend to choose or stay on all sides of the team to glorify our team more

The phrase 'stay on all sides of the team' is unclear and awkward. It would be better to say 'take sides' or 'support our team passionately'. Also, 'so as to' can be simplified to 'to' for clarity.