聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to answer in present tense and give a complete sentence. For example, say "Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax." This makes your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a topic sentence, then explain with linking words. Avoid filler words like "Umm" and expressions like "Oh my God." For example, "I usually chat with my friends about the history of different countries because we both enjoy learning about other cultures."

範例: I usually chat with my friends about the history of different countries because we both enjoy learning about other cultures.

建議: Your answer is good but can be more concise and use better linking words. Avoid repeating "umm" and try to use words like "because" and "also" properly. For example, "I prefer chatting with a group because I can learn more stories about different people, and we can study and hang out together."

範例: I prefer chatting with a group because I can learn more stories about different people, and we can study and hang out together.

建議: Try to avoid filler words and improve grammar. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas. For example, "I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we can feel emotions better and understand each other more clearly."

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we can feel emotions better and understand each other more clearly.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Try to answer directly and use linking words like "but" or "however" properly. For example, "Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions, but we still remain good friends."

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions, but we still remain good friends.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I do.

The question is in the present tense 'Do you like chatting with friends?', so the answer should also be in the present tense. Using 'did' indicates past tense, which is incorrect here.

× I usually chat about with my friend is about country history.

✓ What I usually chat about with my friend is country history.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing elements. The corrected sentence properly structures the clause to express the topic of chat clearly.

× both of us like other another country history like we wanted to learn.

✓ both of us like other countries' history because we want to learn it.

The phrase 'other another' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'country history' should be plural possessive 'countries' history' to indicate history of multiple countries. 'Like we wanted to learn' is incorrect tense and structure; it should be 'because we want to learn it'.

× I prefer to chat with a group.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people.

The phrase 'a group' is vague; specifying 'a group of people' clarifies the meaning.

× This is because umm I can learn more story about the group, the person of the group and also we can study together, we can go out together, we can hang out together and also we can umm be a best friend.

✓ This is because I can learn more stories about the group and its members, and we can study, go out, hang out together, and also become best friends.

The original sentence is long and awkward with repeated phrases. The correction improves clarity and fluency by restructuring and combining ideas properly.

× I prefer to communicate face to face with my friend.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my friend.

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb or adjective.

× This because umm if we was using their social media we can't feel the emotion and we don't know the real story.

✓ This is because if we use social media, we can't feel the emotion and we don't know the real story.

'Was' is past tense and incorrect here; 'we' requires 'were' if past tense, but the sentence is general, so present tense 'use' is appropriate. Also, 'their social media' is vague; 'social media' is better.

× And if we umm communicate face to face we can umm know each other.

✓ And if we communicate face-to-face, we can get to know each other.

'Know each other' is incomplete; the phrase 'get to know each other' is the correct expression. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated.

× Yes, I agree with my friend, especially when when we have a different idea, different opinions of the of the one things and uh, however, we can be the best friend, so.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friend, especially when we have different ideas or opinions about one thing; however, we can still be best friends.

The question is 'Do you argue with friends?', so the answer should be 'I argue' not 'I agree'. The sentence has repeated words and awkward phrasing. 'The best friend' should be 'best friends' to indicate mutual friendship.