聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'Umm' and be more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because it helps me relax and express my feelings freely without hesitation, as I know they won't judge me.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and linking words. Avoid repetition and clarify your points more effectively.

範例: Since I have a two-year-old child and a friend with a baby of similar age, we usually discuss our babies' activities and milestones. Moreover, when I feel stressed about my baby's behavior, her positive attitude helps me feel relaxed.

建議: Good answer with clear preference. To improve, use more formal linking words and avoid contractions for a more natural and effective response.

範例: I usually prefer chatting with one friend at a time because group conversations often involve various topics, which prevent heart-to-heart discussions. Therefore, talking to one friend allows me to share my thoughts and feelings more comfortably.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains many filler words. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid hesitation sounds. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than social media or messages because it allows me to see the other person's expressions and use gestures, which makes it easier to express my feelings openly.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because close friendships do not always mean agreement. However, I am confident that my friends understand my feelings and intentions during such arguments.

× Yes, I like chatting with some of my best friends because it helps to relax my mind and pour out the feelings.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with some of my best friends because it helps me relax my mind and pour out my feelings.

The phrase 'helps to relax' is less natural here; 'helps me relax' is preferred. Also, 'pour out the feelings' should be 'pour out my feelings' to specify whose feelings are being expressed.

× I can explain to them without any sort of hesitation and I know they would not judge me in any case.

✓ I can explain to them without any sort of hesitation, and I know they would not judge me in any case.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate two independent clauses properly, improving sentence clarity.

× As I am a mother of a 2 year old child, I have a friend who has a baby of the similar age.

✓ As I am a mother of a 2-year-old child, I have a friend who has a baby of a similar age.

'2 year old' should be hyphenated as '2-year-old' when used as an adjective. Also, 'the similar age' is incorrect; it should be 'a similar age' because it refers to an unspecified similar age.

× So I usually chat with her about her baby's activities and the milestones.

✓ So I usually chat with her about her baby's activities and milestones.

The definite article 'the' before 'milestones' is unnecessary here because 'milestones' is a general term, not specific ones previously mentioned.

× And also if I am stressed out about any of my babies behavior I chat with her in her positive thinking makes me feel relaxed.

✓ Also, if I am stressed out about any of my baby's behavior, I chat with her because her positive thinking makes me feel relaxed.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'because' clarifies the cause-effect relationship, and 'baby's' should be singular possessive to match 'any of my baby's behavior.'

× I usually prefer to chat with only one friend at a time because in a group of people there are different topics to discuss and there is no heart to heart conversation.

✓ I usually prefer to chat with only one friend at a time because in a group of people there are different topics to discuss and there is no heart-to-heart conversation.

'Heart to heart' should be hyphenated as 'heart-to-heart' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× But when you're talking with one friend only, you can share your thoughts and your feelings more comfortably.

✓ But when you're talking with only one friend, you can share your thoughts and feelings more comfortably.

'One friend only' is better expressed as 'only one friend' for natural word order. Also, 'your feelings' is fine, but removing the second 'your' avoids redundancy.

× I prefer to communicate face to face or not by social media or not even by messages because I think in face to face conversation you can also see other persons expressions and you are more comfortable to open up about your uh, feelings.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face, not by social media or even by messages, because I think in face-to-face conversation you can also see other person's expressions and you are more comfortable opening up about your feelings.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'Other persons expressions' should be 'other person's expressions' (singular possessive). Also, 'more comfortable to open up' should be 'more comfortable opening up' for correct verb form after 'comfortable.'

× Also, uh, you can talk with your gesture and umm, there are.

✓ Also, you can talk with your gestures, and, um, there are many ways to express yourself.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'many ways to express yourself' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because when you have a close friendship, uh, all the matters are not on the same page.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because when you have a close friendship, not all matters are on the same page.

'All the matters are not on the same page' is awkward; 'not all matters are on the same page' is the correct and natural phrasing.

× Sometimes you also argue with them and but I know when I argue, I know my my friend would understand my feelings and would understand what I'm trying to say.

✓ Sometimes you also argue with them, but I know when I argue, my friend understands my feelings and knows what I'm trying to say.

'And but' is incorrect; only one conjunction 'but' is needed. Also, 'my my friend' is a repetition error. Using present tense 'understands' and 'knows' fits better here for habitual actions.