聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến thì và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected and share my thoughts easily.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

範例: I usually talk with my friends about problems at school or in my family. Besides that, we sometimes discuss my relationships and disagreements we have had.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý đến số nhiều/số ít và cấu trúc câu. Bạn nên dùng từ nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm lý do cụ thể.

範例: To be honest, I prefer chatting with only one friend because it feels more private, and I can speak freely without worrying about others.

建議: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "sigh" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn lý do bạn thích giao tiếp qua mạng xã hội.

範例: Honestly, as an introvert, I prefer communicating through social media because I feel more comfortable than talking face-to-face with others.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản và giải thích rõ hơn về việc tranh luận với bạn bè.

範例: Yes, sometimes my friends and I argue, especially about problems at school, like tests, but we usually resolve our misunderstandings quickly.

× Certainly I'm into chatting with my friends because I was young people and I scoring those social media a lot, so I have time online and chatting with my friend.

✓ Certainly I'm into chatting with my friends because I was young and I score on social media a lot, so I have time online chatting with my friends.

The phrase 'I was young people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and cannot be used with 'I was'. It should be 'I was young'. Also, 'I scoring' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I score' to match the present tense. 'Chatting with my friend' should be plural 'friends' to be consistent with earlier mention.

× Well, I usually chat with my friends about problem in high school or in my family.

✓ Well, I usually chat with my friends about problems in high school or in my family.

The word 'problem' should be plural 'problems' because it refers to multiple issues. Also, 'in high school or in my family' is correct preposition usage.

× Besides, I also umm talking with my friends about my boyfriends and some arguments about among we.

✓ Besides, I also talk with my friends about my boyfriends and some arguments among us.

'I also umm talking' is incorrect; it should be 'I also talk' to match the present tense. 'Arguments about among we' is incorrect; 'among us' is the correct phrase.

× Umm, to be honest I'm into that with only one friends because it will be private and I can say what I want without thinking a lot.

✓ Umm, to be honest I'm into that with only one friend because it will be private and I can say what I want without thinking a lot.

'One friends' is incorrect because 'one' requires a singular noun; it should be 'one friend'.

× Umm honestly, I'm an introvert so I'm keen on chatting on through social media because I really sigh when I face to face with other people.

✓ Umm honestly, I'm an introvert so I'm keen on chatting through social media because I really sigh when I face other people face to face.

'Keen on chatting on through social media' has an unnecessary preposition 'on'. It should be 'keen on chatting through social media'. Also, 'face to face with other people' is better expressed as 'face other people face to face'.

× Certainly, although we have been friends for two years, but there sometimes we misunderstand and we agree about some problem in high school are about my test.

✓ Certainly, although we have been friends for two years, sometimes we misunderstand and disagree about some problems in high school, especially about my tests.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions 'although' and 'but' together, which is incorrect. Also, 'there sometimes we misunderstand' is awkward; it should be 'sometimes we misunderstand'. 'We agree about some problem' should be 'we disagree about some problems'. 'Are about my test' is incorrect; it should be 'especially about my tests'.