聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'friends who is' should be 'friends who are'. Also, 'It will intrigue my inspiration' is unclear and unnatural. Try to use simpler, clearer expressions and correct grammar. Keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when they share exciting experiences. I like to listen carefully because it inspires me and helps me understand them better.

建議: Your answer has several unclear and incorrect phrases, such as 'ghosts always like to talk about their boyfriend'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing. Try to organise your ideas clearly, use correct vocabulary, and avoid unnecessary fillers like 'uh'. Provide specific examples to support your points.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about work, relationships, and daily life. For example, when someone has a disagreement with their boyfriend, they often ask for advice on how to resolve it.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, 'Will I prefer chat' should be 'I prefer to chat'. Avoid repeating fillers like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clear reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I'm not very comfortable in groups. When I have a problem, I like to ask a trusted friend for advice on what to do next.

建議: Your answer shows good ideas but has grammatical errors and unclear pronoun references, such as 'he express herself'. Try to use consistent pronouns and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because you can understand people better through their body language and gestures. However, communication via social media can be less clear and sometimes confusing.

建議: Your answer conveys your opinion but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as 'Or will I hardly argue'. Try to use simple, correct sentences and avoid repetition. Also, explain your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe disagreements can harm our friendship. Instead, I prefer to discuss issues calmly and find peaceful solutions.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends, especially those friends who is experiencing some exciting things and I'd like to be a listener when they talk to me.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends, especially those friends who are experiencing some exciting things and I'd like to be a listener when they talk to me.

The subject 'friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× It will intrigue my inspiration.

✓ It will inspire me.

The phrase 'intrigue my inspiration' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'inspire me' to convey that it motivates or stimulates you.

× Well, the topic I usually chat with my friends is work, love and life.

✓ Well, the topics I usually chat about with my friends are work, love and life.

The verb 'chat' is followed by the preposition 'about' when indicating topics. Also, 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match the list, and the verb should be plural 'are' to agree with the plural subject.

× Uh, the love would be the popular topic that goes always to chat because ghosts always like to talk about their boyfriend and when especially when they have a a small fight, they will ask their friends how to do the next step.

✓ Uh, love is the popular topic that people always chat about because girls always like to talk about their boyfriends, especially when they have a small fight; they will ask their friends what to do next.

Several errors: 'the love' should be 'love' without 'the'; 'goes always to chat' is incorrect, should be 'people always chat about'; 'ghosts' is likely a mishearing of 'girls'; 'boyfriend' should be plural 'boyfriends' to match 'girls'; 'how to do the next step' should be 'what to do next'. Subject-verb agreement and preposition use corrected.

× Will I prefer chat with only one friend because I'm not kind of people person?

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm not the kind of people person.

'Will I prefer' is incorrect here; the modal 'will' is unnecessary. Also, 'not kind of people person' should be 'not the kind of people person'. Modal verb usage and article use corrected.

× I when I chat with group people, I will feel uncomfortable and I will ask for only one friend that I trust for I will ask them, uh, I'll ask her about the advice and uh, when I have a trouble what to do next?

✓ When I chat with a group of people, I feel uncomfortable and I prefer to ask only one friend that I trust for advice when I have trouble deciding what to do next.

'Chat with group people' should be 'chat with a group of people'; 'ask for only one friend' is incorrect, should be 'ask only one friend'; 'have a trouble' should be 'have trouble'; sentence structure improved for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because when you communicate with the people face to face, you can feel him directly especially when he express herself, use her body language or gesture is easy to get him.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when you communicate with people face to face, you can feel them directly, especially when they express themselves; using their body language or gestures makes it easy to understand them.

'With the people' should be 'with people'; pronouns inconsistent ('him', 'her', 'she'); corrected to plural 'them' and 'themselves'; 'gesture is easy to get him' is incorrect, corrected to 'gestures makes it easy to understand them'.

× But in the contrast if you use communicate in social media, it's hard to find.

✓ But in contrast, if you communicate via social media, it's hard to understand.

'In the contrast' should be 'in contrast'; 'use communicate in social media' is incorrect, should be 'communicate via social media'; 'hard to find' is unclear, corrected to 'hard to understand'.

× Or will I hardly argue with my friends because I think it will break our friendship and I think it's no need to have a disagreement in your friendship.

✓ I hardly ever argue with my friends because I think it will break our friendship and I think there's no need to have disagreements in a friendship.

'Or will I hardly argue' is incorrect modal usage; corrected to 'I hardly ever argue'. Also, 'it's no need' should be 'there's no need'; 'a disagreement' pluralised to 'disagreements' for general meaning.

× Instead I prefer to talk, talk things calmly and find a peace way to.

✓ Instead, I prefer to talk calmly and find a peaceful way to resolve issues.

Sentence incomplete and awkward. 'Talk things calmly' is incorrect; corrected to 'talk calmly'. 'Find a peace way to' is incorrect; corrected to 'find a peaceful way to resolve issues' for clarity and correctness.