聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share our experiences about life, work, and future plans. This helps us support each other and strengthen our friendship.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and complete your sentences. Be specific about topics and explain why you enjoy chatting about them.

範例: I usually chat with my girlfriends about makeup, shopping, and family matters because these topics help us express ourselves and relax after a busy day.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Clearly state your preference and explain your reasons using linking words. Keep your sentences concise and natural.

範例: I prefer chatting in a small group where everyone can share their thoughts because it makes me feel more comfortable and secure.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see the other person's emotions clearly, which helps me understand them better than through social media or video calls.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Complete your sentences and explain your approach to differing opinions using linking words. Be specific and natural in your response.

範例: I don't usually argue with my friends; however, when we have different opinions, I try to understand their point of view and respect our differences.

× I think the moment that you have from the shared experience with your friends, about life, about work, about your worries, about your happiness, the plans you have for the future.

✓ I think the moments you have from shared experiences with your friends, about life, work, worries, happiness, and plans for the future, are important.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or clear structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction restructures the sentence to clearly express the idea that these moments are important, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I think like a good chance for friend is something that you really need for.

✓ So I think a good chance to have friends is something that you really need.

The original sentence uses 'a good chance for friend' which is incorrect; 'friend' should be plural or replaced with 'friends'. Also, the phrase 'you really need for' is incomplete and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects quantifier usage.

× With my girlfriends, I usually chat about makeup, shopping, about building, about family that we honest when we chat with girlfriends is a good way to express ourselves and relax so when you express yourself, you.

✓ With my girlfriends, I usually chat about makeup, shopping, building, and family. Being honest when we chat with girlfriends is a good way to express ourselves and relax.

The original sentence has incorrect and missing prepositions and is run-on, making it confusing. The correction separates ideas into clear sentences and corrects prepositional usage for clarity.

× I'm uncomfortable chatting with few people running that a group and this kind of person that prefer to have a conversation where everyone can share and where I feel more comfortable and secure.

✓ I'm uncomfortable chatting with a few people in a group, and I prefer to have a conversation where everyone can share and where I feel more comfortable and secure.

The original sentence has singular/plural mismatches and awkward phrasing ('few people running that a group'). The correction uses 'a few people' and corrects the structure for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb or adjective to correctly convey the meaning of direct communication.

× You can see if the person is happy, if he's sad or if there is something wrong.

✓ You can see if the person is happy, if they are sad, or if there is something wrong.

Using 'he's' assumes the person is male; 'they' is a gender-neutral singular pronoun appropriate here to refer to any person.

× You can address it in an easier way that when it's in a video call.

✓ You can address it more easily than when it's on a video call.

The original sentence misuses 'an easier way that' and the preposition 'in' with 'video call'. The correction uses comparative form 'more easily than' and correct preposition 'on' for 'video call'.

× I don't argue with friends, however sometimes they can give opinions that they are different to my opinions and in these cases what I'm trying to do is to understand that everyone has.

✓ I don't argue with friends; however, sometimes they have opinions different from mine, and in these cases, I try to understand that everyone has their own views.

The original sentence misuses modal verbs and has awkward phrasing ('opinions that they are different to my opinions'). The correction uses appropriate modal verbs and clearer expressions to convey the intended meaning.