聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to start your answer directly and avoid unnecessary fillers like 'Is' and repeated words. Use clear and concise sentences, and avoid redundancy. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I love chatting with my friends, especially about school events and daily life.' This makes your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends, especially about school events and daily life. Since I'm a 17-year-old student, we often share our experiences and thoughts about what's happening around us.

建議: Avoid excessive hesitation and filler words like 'uh'. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. For example, say, 'We usually chat about upcoming exams, especially the challenging board exams, and how we are preparing for them.' This improves clarity and coherence.

範例: We usually chat about upcoming exams, especially the challenging board exams, and how we are preparing for them. Since I'm in 12th grade, these exams are very important for our future.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'My preference depends on my mood because chatting with a group offers diverse opinions, but I feel more comfortable talking one-on-one with my best friend.'

範例: My preference depends on my mood because chatting with a group offers diverse opinions, but I feel more comfortable talking one-on-one with my best friend, who understands me well.

建議: Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Use clear linking words to explain your preferences. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication when I feel comfortable because it allows natural conversation. However, social media is also convenient. Sometimes, meeting someone in person after chatting online feels awkward.'

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication when I feel comfortable because it allows natural conversation. However, social media is also convenient for staying in touch. Sometimes, meeting someone in person after chatting online feels a bit awkward.

建議: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words and repetitive phrases. For example, say, 'Yes, I do argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, arguing helps us understand each other better and improves our communication.'

範例: Yes, I do argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, arguing helps us understand each other better and improves our communication.

× Is I love chatting with my friends, mostly gossiping because I'm a 17 year old kid going to school and obviously we have, uh, lots of, have lots of things happening in our school and we, I'm a girl, so obviously we like gossiping and chatting.

✓ I love chatting with my friends, mostly gossiping because I'm a 17 year old kid going to school and obviously we have lots of things happening in our school and, I'm a girl, so obviously we like gossiping and chatting.

The sentence incorrectly starts with 'Is I love' which is a subject-verb agreement error. The correct form is simply 'I love' because 'I' is the subject and 'love' is the verb that agrees with it. The auxiliary 'Is' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× We usually talk about, uh, the exams which are going to, uh, be coming because I'm in 12th grade and, uh, we have poor exams in a few months, uh, in three months.

✓ We usually talk about the exams which are going to come because I'm in 12th grade and we have our exams in a few months, in three months.

The phrase 'be coming' is awkward and incorrect here; 'going to come' or simply 'coming' is better. Also, 'poor exams' is incorrect; it should be 'our exams' to indicate possession. The preposition 'in' is correctly used for time expressions.

× The preference My preference usually depends upon the situation and my mood since, uh, when I'm with a group of people there are a lot of varying opinions and when I'm at only one friend, it's mostly my best friend or someone I'm really close to.

✓ My preference usually depends upon the situation and my mood since, when I'm with a group of people there are a lot of varying opinions and when I'm with only one friend, it's mostly my best friend or someone I'm really close to.

The phrase 'when I'm at only one friend' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'with' to indicate being in the company of someone. Also, the initial 'The preference' is redundant and removed for clarity.

× That also depends on my mood since, umm, when we're talking face to face, if I'm comfortable with the person, I'll speak a lot, uh, without thinking, uh, I'll be very comfortable, but via social media also too comfortable.

✓ That also depends on my mood since, when we're talking face to face, if I'm comfortable with the person, I'll speak a lot without thinking, and I'll be very comfortable, but via social media I'm also comfortable.

The phrase 'via social media also too comfortable' is incorrect. It should be 'via social media I'm also comfortable' to correctly express the idea. Also, unnecessary fillers and repeated words are removed for clarity.

× But if, if I see the same person I'm talking to in social media and I just see the person face to face, it's coming very awkward for me because I don't know.

✓ But if I see the same person I'm talking to on social media and then see the person face to face, it becomes very awkward for me because I don't know why.

The correct preposition for platforms like social media is 'on' not 'in'. Also, 'it's coming very awkward' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it becomes very awkward'. Added 'why' for sentence completeness.

× Yeah, well, of course I'm a human and I do argue with my friends because they're another person and I'm another human being and she has, she or he has their own opinion and I have my own opinion as well.

✓ Yeah, well, of course I'm human and I do argue with my friends because they're other people and I am another human being and they have their own opinions and I have my own opinion as well.

The sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural pronouns. 'They're another person' should be 'they're other people' to agree in number. Also, 'she has, she or he has their own opinion' is awkward; using 'they have their own opinions' is more natural and grammatically correct.