聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat natural but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct tense and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'share my thoughts up only', say 'share my thoughts openly'.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts openly. For example, after a long day at work, sharing experiences and funny stories always brightens my day. Moreover, it helps to build strong relationships.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and be specific. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example, instead of 'movies created a extra funnel', clarify what you mean. Try to give clear and relevant examples.

範例: Well, we usually talk about various movies or series. For example, we often discuss movies directed by famous directors and appreciate their style. Additionally, we sometimes talk about our daily lives, such as work, stories, and hobbies.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas. Try to add a concluding sentence to summarize your preference.

範例: I usually prefer chatting with only one friend because the conversation feels more personal and relaxed. For example, when I talk with a close friend, we can share our thoughts openly without distractions, which builds a strong bond of trust. Therefore, one-on-one chats are more meaningful to me.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct prepositions and conjunctions. Also, try to use linking words to contrast ideas clearly.

範例: I prefer talking face-to-face rather than communicating via social media because online chats often lead to misunderstandings since people may not listen carefully. In contrast, face-to-face conversations make it easier to understand each other.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and an unclear ending. Avoid incomplete or irrelevant sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about how arguing can be positive.

範例: Yes, of course. If my friends have different opinions from mine, sometimes we argue to share our perspectives. For example, if we disagree about who is the best player, we discuss our reasons, which helps us communicate more openly and understand each other better.

× Yes, I really enjoyed chatting with my friends because it helps me to relax and share my thoughts up only.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me to relax and share my thoughts openly.

The sentence mixes past tense 'enjoyed' with present tense 'helps'. Since the question is about a general habit, present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate. Also, 'share my thoughts up only' is incorrect; 'openly' is the correct adverb here.

× For example, after a long day at work.

✓ For example, after a long day at work, I like to chat with my friends.

The sentence is a fragment without a main verb or complete thought. It needs to be connected to a main clause to form a complete sentence.

× Sharing your experiences and funny stories with your friends always open up your day.

✓ Sharing your experiences and funny stories with your friends always opens up your day.

The subject 'Sharing' is singular, so the verb should be 'opens' not 'open' to agree in number.

× Moreover, it also helps to build relationship.

✓ Moreover, it also helps to build relationships.

The noun 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to correctly express the general idea of building multiple or any relationships.

× Well, we usually said about various movies or series.

✓ Well, we usually talk about various movies or series.

The verb 'said' is past tense and incorrect here; 'talk' is the correct present tense verb to describe habitual action.

× For example, we often talk about the movies created a extra funnel and appreciate it for the way he has directed it.

✓ For example, we often talk about movies created by a director and appreciate them for the way they have been directed.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect phrasing. 'Created a extra funnel' is incorrect; it should be 'created by a director'. Also, 'movies' is plural, so pronouns and verbs must agree in number.

× We also sometimes talk about our daily life aspects such as work, story and hobbies.

✓ We also sometimes talk about our daily life aspects such as work, stories, and hobbies.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the plural list and context.

× I usually prefer chatting with only one friend because the conversation feels more personal and relaxed.

✓ I usually prefer chatting with just one friend because the conversation feels more personal and relaxed.

The phrase 'with only one friend' is acceptable but 'with just one friend' is more natural in this context.

× For example, talking with a close friend of mine, we can share our thoughts more openly and without any distractions, which also builds a strong bond of trust.

✓ For example, when talking with a close friend of mine, we can share our thoughts more openly and without any distractions, which also builds a strong bond of trust.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the clauses properly; adding 'when' improves sentence structure.

× I prefer talking to you on this face to face rather than communicating on social media because when we chat online, people often don't listen carefully which leads to misunderstanding most of the time.

✓ I prefer talking to you face to face rather than communicating on social media because when we chat online, people often don't listen carefully, which leads to misunderstandings most of the time.

The phrase 'on this face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'face to face'. Also, 'misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings' to match the context.

× But in face to face conversation, it is easier to understand English.

✓ But in face-to-face conversation, it is easier to understand English.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective before a noun.

× Yes, of course, if my friends have different opinions from mine, sometimes we argue sharing our perspective.

✓ Yes, of course, if my friends have different opinions from mine, sometimes we argue by sharing our perspectives.

The phrase 'argue sharing' is incorrect; 'argue by sharing' correctly expresses the manner of arguing. Also, 'perspective' should be plural 'perspectives'.

× For example, if we disagree about who is the best player, we discuss our reasons and this helps to communicate more openly.

✓ For example, if we disagree about who is the best player, we discuss our reasons, and this helps us communicate more openly.

The sentence needs a comma before 'and' to separate independent clauses and 'helps to communicate' should be 'helps us communicate' for clarity.