聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and incomplete thoughts. For example, explain clearly what you learn and how chatting helps you in bad situations, and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me learn new things and gain different perspectives. For instance, when I face a difficult situation, talking to them gives me advice on how to handle it better.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete sentences. Provide specific details and use linking words to make your answer coherent and complete.

範例: We usually chat about the fashion industry. For example, my friends share their favorite clothes, and I tell them about mine. Besides that, we also discuss the latest fashion trends.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide a complete example to support your preference.

範例: I prefer both because chatting with a group gives me different perspectives, while chatting with one friend offers a deeper conversation. For example, in group chats, I learn various opinions, but one-on-one talks help me understand my friend's feelings better.

建議: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and clarifying your points. Use linking words to explain why you prefer face-to-face communication and give specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to express my feelings more clearly. Social media is less effective, especially when I am in a bad situation and need emotional support.

建議: Avoid filler words and try to organize your answer logically. Provide specific reasons for arguments and keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: Yes, we argue sometimes, mainly about past actions and future plans related to our careers. These discussions help us understand each other's perspectives better.

× Yeah, I really like chatting with my friends because every time when I chat with my friends I learn new things and I know how to handle with. But when I'm in a bad situation.

✓ Yeah, I really like chatting with my friends because every time I chat with them, I learn new things and I know how to handle situations, even when I'm in a bad situation.

The original sentence has a sentence fragment 'But when I'm in a bad situation' which is incomplete and unclear. Also, 'handle with' is incorrect; the verb 'handle' does not require 'with'. The sentence structure needs to be corrected to form a complete and clear sentence.

× I prefer I prefer both because chatting with a group of people you will gain different perspectives while with only one people you will gain only one opinion.

✓ I prefer both because chatting with a group of people allows you to gain different perspectives, while chatting with only one person gives you only one opinion.

The phrase 'only one people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; the singular form 'person' should be used here. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'allows you to' for clarity.

× I really like to communicate them face to face because it expressed it shows how we can express our feelings well.

✓ I really like to communicate with them face to face because it shows how we can express our feelings well.

The verb 'communicate' requires the preposition 'with' before the object pronoun 'them'. Also, 'it expressed it shows' is redundant and incorrect; 'it shows' is sufficient.

× I know how to handle with.

✓ I know how to handle it.

The verb 'handle' does not require the preposition 'with'. The correct form is 'handle' followed directly by the object.

× And then we also talk about.

✓ And then we also talk about other topics.

The sentence ends abruptly without specifying what is talked about, making it incomplete. Adding 'other topics' completes the sentence meaningfully.