聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在重复词汇（"it it"），影响流畅性。建议避免重复，句子结构应更自然，且补充细节时应使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to release stress and lift my mood. For example, when I share my problems with them, they usually give me helpful advice.

建議: 回答不完整，句子结构不完整且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as work or study experiences. Also, we share the problems we face, and by discussing them, I can get some useful advice.

建議: 回答中存在不完整句子，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，避免句子碎片，并用连接词连接观点。

範例: I definitely prefer chatting with just one friend because we can have a more meaningful and connected conversation without worrying about other people's opinions.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法，并清楚表达观点。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand others' feelings better through their facial expressions and body language.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的语法，表达完整的想法，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, if it is with my close friend, I will express my feelings directly to resolve the issue.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it it allows me to release stress and also lift my mood.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to release stress and also lift my mood.

句子中出现了重复的单词“it it”，属于多余错误，应删除一个“it”以保证句子通顺。

× Focus for example, if I talk about my problem with them, they will give me some advice.

✓ For example, if I talk about my problem with them, they will give me some advice.

“Focus for example”结构不正确，应直接使用“for example”引出例子。

× I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives like works or study experience.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives like work or study experience.

“works”在此处应为不可数名词“work”，表示工作，复数形式不合适。

× Also we will share our problem that we face too.

✓ Also we will share our problems that we face too.

“problem”应为复数形式“problems”，因为指多个问题。

× By discuss with them I can get some.

✓ By discussing with them I can get some.

“By”后应接动名词形式，故“discuss”应改为“discussing”。

× I definitely prefer chatting with just one friend because we can have more connecting and meaningful conversation.

✓ I definitely prefer chatting with just one friend because we can have more connection and meaningful conversation.

“connecting”是动词的现在分词，句中应使用名词“connection”表示“联系”。

× Instead of worrying other people's opinions.

✓ Instead of worrying about other people's opinions.

“worry”后应接介词“about”，表示“担心……”，缺少介词导致句子不完整。

× Also.

单独的“Also.”不是完整句子，应补充内容或与前后句合并。

× I prefer face to face communication because if we communicate in person we can know more about her feeling or his feeling by through people's facial expression or body language to avoid by the.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because if we communicate in person we can know more about her feelings or his feelings through people's facial expressions or body language to avoid misunderstandings.

“face to face”应连字符连接为“face-to-face”；“feeling”应为复数“feelings”；“by through”重复，应去掉“by”；句尾“to avoid by the”不完整，应补充完整表达。

× Sometimes we have some argument with my friend, maybe it's because we have different opinion on something, but if it's our my close friend I will just go straight away to express.

✓ Sometimes we have some arguments with my friend, maybe it's because we have different opinions on something, but if it's my close friend I will just go straight away to express.

“argument”和“opinion”应使用复数形式“arguments”和“opinions”，因为指多个争论和观点；“our my”重复，应去掉“our”。