聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating the same ideas. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to exchange our thoughts and feelings, which helps strengthen our communication.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas logically and use complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples.

範例: I usually chat about how our days have been, any new developments in our lives, my plans for my dream job, and we also discuss recent problems and share ideas on how to solve them.

建議: Your answer is clear but contains some redundancy and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more naturally and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it's more comfortable for me, whereas chatting with a group can be quite overwhelming.

建議: Your answer has good content but is somewhat disorganized and repetitive. Try to structure your answer clearly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to compare the two methods effectively.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because, unlike social media, it allows me to express my emotions and feelings more clearly through body language and tone.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide clear reasons. Use linking words to explain your ideas logically.

範例: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I value our relationship. However, sometimes disagreements happen, especially with some friends, but I try to resolve them peacefully.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I love to, to exchange our thoughts, our feelings, uh, my thoughts, my feelings with my friends and to umm, she gives her thoughts, their feelings and to make communication with them.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I love to exchange our thoughts and feelings with them, and they share their thoughts and feelings to communicate with each other.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes infinitive forms and pronouns, and uses 'she' and 'their' inconsistently. The phrase 'to make communication' is unnatural; 'to communicate' is correct. Also, pronouns should be consistent and clear. The correction simplifies and clarifies the sentence structure, using correct verb forms and pronouns.

× Uh, I usually chat about our, how, how our days have spent, what's new in our life, uh, what plans do I have, uh, in my dream job or what should I do?

✓ Uh, I usually chat about how our days have been spent, what's new in our lives, what plans I have, my dream job, or what I should do.

The phrase 'how our days have spent' is incorrect; it should be 'how our days have been spent' using the present perfect passive form. Also, 'what plans do I have' is a question form, but here it should be a statement 'what plans I have' to fit the sentence structure. 'Our life' should be plural 'our lives' to match 'our days'.

× Uh, we speak about recent, our recent problems and share our ideas how to.

✓ Uh, we speak about our recent problems and share our ideas on how to solve them.

The phrase 'recent, our recent problems' is redundant; 'our recent problems' suffices. The sentence ends abruptly with 'share our ideas how to' which is incomplete. Adding 'on how to solve them' completes the thought. Pronouns and references should be clear and complete.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I find it more comfortable and I find it very very bothered to to chat with a group of people. All the people.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I find it more comfortable, and I find it very bothersome to chat with a group of people.

The phrase 'very very bothered' is incorrect; 'bothered' is an adjective describing a feeling, but here 'bothersome' or 'annoying' is appropriate. Also, 'All the people.' is a fragment and unnecessary. The correction removes redundancy and fixes word choice.

× I prefer to communicate face to face. It's absolutely different, uh, when you chat, uh, via social media and face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. It's absolutely different when you chat via social media compared to face to face.

The original sentence lacks a clear comparison structure. Adding 'compared to' clarifies the difference between chatting via social media and face to face. Also, removing unnecessary fillers improves clarity.

× So when face to face, uh, you are able to show your emotions, to give your feelings when you are texting.

✓ So when face to face, you are able to show your emotions and express your feelings, unlike when you are texting.

The phrase 'to give your feelings' is unnatural; 'express your feelings' is correct. Also, the sentence contrasts face to face communication with texting, so adding 'unlike' clarifies this contrast.

× Sure, I have some friends with whom there is no other way not to argue, but mostly I don't argue with my best friends.

✓ Sure, I have some friends with whom there is no way not to argue, but mostly I don't argue with my best friends.

The phrase 'no other way not to argue' is awkward. Removing 'other' makes the phrase clearer and grammatically correct: 'no way not to argue' means arguing is inevitable. The conjunction 'but' is used correctly here.

× I chat with my best friends and not just friends and that's why I don't argue 'cause I.

✓ I chat with my best friends, not just any friends, and that's why I don't argue with them.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'with them' completes the thought. Also, 'not just friends' is vague; 'not just any friends' clarifies the meaning. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and completeness.