聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、言い淀みや繰り返しが多く、文法的な誤りもあります。より明確で流暢な表現を心がけ、具体的な理由や感情を簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. We often share funny stories, which is really enjoyable.

建議: 文法の誤りが目立ち、具体的な内容が不足しています。SNSの名前を挙げるだけでなく、どのような話題を話すのか具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

範例: I usually chat with my friends online using apps like Line or TikTok. We talk about our daily lives, hobbies, and sometimes share interesting videos.

建議: 文法と語順の誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、自然な英語で表現する練習が必要です。

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because in group chats, it's hard to find the right time to speak.

建議: 文法の誤りと冗長な表現があります。理由を簡潔に述べ、より自然な表現を使うことを意識しましょう。

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because I can send messages anytime, which is very convenient.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、表現が不自然です。理由を明確にし、簡潔で正しい英語表現を使う練習が必要です。

範例: No, I don't argue with my friends because I want to maintain a friendly and kind relationship with them.

× When I talk with my friends I feel exciting and relaxing.

✓ When I talk with my friends I feel excited and relaxed.

The words 'exciting' and 'relaxing' are present participles used to describe something that causes excitement or relaxation. However, here the student is describing their own feelings, so the correct adjectives are 'excited' and 'relaxed' which describe a person's emotional state.

× And my friends, it's so funny.

✓ And my friends are so funny.

The pronoun 'it' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'friends'. The correct verb form is 'are' to match the plural subject 'friends'.

× For example I using. Line or star or TikTok for example.

✓ For example, I use Line, Star, or TikTok.

The phrase 'I using' is incorrect because the verb 'use' should be in the simple present tense 'use' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'Star' should be capitalized as a proper noun, and the sentence should be clearer and more concise.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because. In case of chat with a group of people, is I losing timing of speaking?

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chat with a group of people, I lose my turn to speak.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The phrase 'In case of chat with a group of people, is I losing timing of speaking?' is ungrammatical and confusing. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions and subject-verb agreement to clearly express the idea.

× I prefer communicate on social media because umm, when I use social media I can send text on whenever, so I prefer to communicate.

✓ I prefer to communicate on social media because, umm, when I use social media I can send texts anytime, so I prefer to communicate that way.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to communicate' (infinitive form). The phrase 'send text on whenever' is incorrect; 'send texts anytime' is more natural. Also, 'communicate' needs an object or context to be clear.

× No I don't because I hate argue with my friends.

✓ No, I don't because I hate arguing with my friends.

The verb 'hate' should be followed by the gerund form 'arguing' rather than the base verb 'argue'. This is a common collocation in English.

× I want to be friendly or kindly so I'm not argue with my friends.

✓ I want to be friendly and kind, so I don't argue with my friends.

'Kindly' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'kind' is needed to describe the subject. Also, 'I'm not argue' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't argue' to express habitual action.

× I want to be kind for in the future.

✓ I want to be kind in the future.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary and incorrect before 'in the future'. The correct phrase is simply 'in the future'.