聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'due to busy schedule, we have no time to of meeting,' say 'because of our busy schedules, we don't have time to meet in person.'

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because our busy schedules often prevent us from meeting in person. Chatting allows us to easily share our feelings and stay connected.

建議: Make sure to use correct verb forms and add more detail to enrich your answer. Also, include linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I usually chat about our group projects because we need to submit them on time. We discuss our progress and divide tasks to ensure everything is completed efficiently.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve grammar, such as subject-verb agreement. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and provide a concise, natural response.

範例: It depends on the situation. When discussing group projects, I prefer chatting with many friends. However, if a friend needs privacy, I talk with them one-on-one.

建議: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure. Use more natural expressions and linking words to make your answer clearer and more fluent.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because miscommunication can happen on social media. Also, face-to-face conversations allow me to read the other person's expressions, which helps understanding.

建議: Clarify your ideas and avoid unclear phrases like 'some disease.' Use correct grammar and provide specific examples to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when we have to make decisions, like choosing between going for a picnic or watching a movie. These disagreements are normal and help us understand each other's preferences better.

× due to busy schedule, uh, we have no time to of meeting

✓ due to a busy schedule, uh, we have no time to meet

The phrase 'no time to of meeting' is incorrect. The correct form is 'no time to meet' because 'to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not 'of' plus a gerund. Also, 'busy schedule' needs an article 'a' before it.

× which we have to submitted on time

✓ which we have to submit on time

The verb 'submitted' is incorrectly used here. After 'have to', the base form of the verb 'submit' should be used, not the past participle 'submitted'.

× Actually, it's depend upon the situation

✓ Actually, it depends upon the situation

The subject 'it' requires the verb in third person singular form 'depends', not 'depend'.

× whenever we discuss about the pro group project

✓ whenever we discuss the group project

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Saying 'discuss about' is incorrect; simply 'discuss' is sufficient.

× whenever a friend need privacy

✓ whenever a friend needs privacy

The subject 'a friend' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'needs' instead of 'need'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face

The phrase 'face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb or adjective.

× on social media sometimes, uh, miscommunication be possible

✓ on social media sometimes, uh, miscommunication is possible

The verb 'be' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is 'is' to agree with the singular noun 'miscommunication'.

× when we talk face to face, then we can also judge the expressions of a person

✓ when we talk face to face, we can also judge a person's expressions

The phrase 'the expressions of a person' is less natural than 'a person's expressions'. Also, 'then' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother flow.

× some disease when we take decision on some matters like go go outside someone someone wants to go for picnic and some some go want to go for movie

✓ sometimes when we make decisions on some matters like going outside, some people want to go for a picnic and some want to go to a movie

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'some disease' should be 'sometimes'; 'take decision' should be 'make decisions'; 'go go outside' is incorrect, should be 'going outside'; 'someone someone' and 'some some' are repetitions and incorrect pronouns; 'go want to go' is incorrect verb usage; 'for movie' should be 'to a movie'. The corrected sentence addresses these issues for clarity and grammatical correctness.