聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ ngữ lặp lại và không tự nhiên, bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ thừa và nói rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share ideas. We often talk about our studies and plan outdoor activities for the weekend.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói lắp, đồng thời trả lời rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Usually, we chat about school-related topics and current events in our community. Since we are high school students, our conversations often focus on exams and social activities.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh nói lắp và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý, đồng thời cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

範例: I prefer chatting with both groups and individual friends. With a group, we can discuss many ideas, while with one friend, I can share personal thoughts, especially with my best friend.

建議: Bạn nên tránh nói lắp và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề, giải thích lý do rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more genuine and allows me to understand the other person's emotions better.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều từ ngữ thừa. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích cụ thể hơn với các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên.

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we face difficult problems. However, these arguments help us understand each other better and find solutions.

× Of course I do chatting with friends, umm, makes me feel like, umm, put my hand down.

✓ Of course I do chat with friends, umm, it makes me feel like, umm, putting my hand down.

The verb 'do' should be followed by the base form 'chat' not the '-ing' form 'chatting'. Also, 'makes me feel like' should be followed by a gerund 'putting' to indicate the action.

× And sometimes we, uh, discuss about some, uh, uh, things that related to our studies are even more like, uh, some exercises outdoor that, that we tend to do at the weekends.

✓ And sometimes we, uh, discuss some, uh, things that are related to our studies or even more like, uh, some outdoor exercises that we tend to do on the weekends.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'related' needs the verb 'are' before it. 'Outdoor' should be an adjective before 'exercises'. The preposition 'on' is used with days or weekends.

× Sometimes, umm, we will, uh, sometimes we will chat, uh, we usually chat about uh, uh, so, uh, societies and uh, something happens in our studies because we are currently studying in the high school.

✓ Sometimes, umm, we will, uh, sometimes we will chat, uh, we usually chat about, uh, uh, social issues and things that happen in our studies because we are currently studying in high school.

The word 'societies' is likely incorrect here; 'social issues' or 'social topics' fits better. Also, 'something happens' should be plural 'things that happen'. The article 'the' before 'high school' is unnecessary when speaking generally.

× Umm, honestly, I prefer boats because, umm, uh, each of them are, are really important to me because, uh, with the, with the group of, uh, with a group of friends, we can discuss more, but uh, only one friends, I can share private things with them.

✓ Umm, honestly, I prefer both because, umm, uh, each of them is really important to me because, uh, with a group of friends, we can discuss more, but with only one friend, I can share private things with them.

'Boats' is a typo for 'both'. 'Each' is singular and should be followed by 'is' not 'are'. 'Only one friends' should be 'only one friend'.

× Honestly, I would love to uh, communicate face to face because it makes me feel uh, real reality and uh, can uh, feel that uh, the opponent, uh, can share their honesty and chinu genuinely.

✓ Honestly, I would love to, uh, communicate face to face because it makes me feel real and, uh, I can feel that, uh, the other person can share their honesty and sincerity genuinely.

'Real reality' is redundant; 'real' suffices. 'Opponent' is incorrect in this context; 'other person' or 'interlocutor' is better. 'Chinu' seems to be a mispronunciation of 'sincerity'. Also, 'can' needs a subject 'I' before it.

× Honestly, yes, uh, there are some situations, umm, that are really hard to, uh, talk, uh, in a friendly way because umm, in some uh, solving problems, we uh, sometimes, uh, have arguments, uh, to each other because we cannot solve if, uh, accurately.

✓ Honestly, yes, uh, there are some situations, umm, that are really hard to, uh, talk in a friendly way because, umm, when solving problems, we sometimes have arguments with each other because we cannot solve them accurately.

The phrase 'discuss to each other' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with each other'. Also, 'in some solving problems' should be 'when solving problems'. The sentence 'we cannot solve if, uh, accurately' is incomplete and corrected to 'we cannot solve them accurately'.