聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện cảm xúc tốt, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ thừa như "really very much" và lặp từ "to". Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và chú ý ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts freely. They always listen to me, which makes me feel supported and happy.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "I usually chatting" nên là "I usually chat". Câu cuối cùng không rõ nghĩa và thiếu liên kết. Hãy sử dụng câu rõ ràng, có liên kết và cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, school events, and sometimes funny or cute things that happen unexpectedly. These topics always make our conversations interesting.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dùng chưa chính xác như "chat to" nên là "chat with", "my speak" không đúng. Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, chính xác và có liên kết để ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because in a group, it's hard to understand everyone since people have different opinions, and sometimes I feel like my voice isn't heard.

建議: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng câu hơi dài và lặp từ "you can" nhiều lần. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời chú ý dấu câu để câu rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see their emotions, read their body language, and tell if they are being truthful or not by looking into their eyes.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn về việc tranh luận với bạn bè.

範例: Sometimes we have disagreements when we don't see things the same way, but we don't really argue. Instead, we talk about our feelings to understand each other better.

× I usually chatting with my friends about my daily life, the dramas in schools or classes and something cute.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my daily life, the dramas in schools or classes and something cute.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used here. After 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. The correct form is 'I usually chat'. This is because 'usually' is an adverb of frequency and is followed by the base verb in present simple tense.

× I would rather chat to only one friend because I find it kinda difficult to understand each other in a group of people because everyone has their own opinions so maybe they don't listen to my voice my speak.

✓ I would rather chat with only one friend because I find it kind of difficult to understand each other in a group of people because everyone has their own opinions so maybe they don't listen to my voice or my speech.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'chat'. The correct preposition is 'with' when referring to communicating with someone. Also, 'kinda' is informal and should be 'kind of'. Additionally, 'my speak' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'my speech'. The phrase 'my voice or my speech' is clearer.

× I'd like to communicate face to face because you can see what emotions they are showing and you can look at their eyes and like you can see all the truth or lies and there are body language too.

✓ I'd like to communicate face-to-face because you can see what emotions they are showing and you can look into their eyes and see the truth or lies, and there is body language too.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb. Also, 'look at their eyes' is better expressed as 'look into their eyes' to indicate deeper observation. 'There are body language' is incorrect; 'body language' is uncountable, so 'there is body language' is correct.

× Sometimes when we, we're not in the same way land and we argue like it's just not argue.

✓ Sometimes when we are not on the same wavelength, we argue, but it's not really an argument.

The phrase 'not in the same way land' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'not on the same wavelength'. Also, 'we argue like it's just not argue' is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× It's just, uh, we talk to each other about each other feelings and we.

✓ It's just that we talk to each other about our feelings.

The sentence is incomplete and has redundancy. 'Each other feelings' should be 'each other's feelings' or better 'our feelings'. The corrected sentence is complete and grammatically correct.