聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh những câu bị lặp lại hoặc không hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a long day and share my experiences with them.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngập ngừng như "uh", "umm". Hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện để câu trả lời sinh động và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I usually chat about my daily activities, school subjects, and sometimes about the dramas or events happening among my friends at school.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích trò chuyện với nhóm bạn.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because there are many members, so I can hear different opinions and have more interesting conversations.

建議: Bạn cần luyện tập phát âm và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Tránh sử dụng từ sai nghĩa như "erection" thay vì "reaction". Hãy nói câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng để người nghe hiểu ý bạn.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see their reactions and understand their feelings better when we talk in person.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp. Tránh dùng cấu trúc câu phức tạp không chính xác. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về việc bạn có hay tranh cãi với bạn bè không và vì sao.

範例: Sometimes, I argue with my friends when we have different opinions, but we usually resolve our disagreements quickly.

× because when I'm chatting I can't tell, I can't talk everything in my date with my friend and it can help me, I'm quite after a long day.

✓ because when I'm chatting I can't tell, I can't talk about everything in my date with my friend and it can help me, I'm quite tired after a long day.

The phrase 'talk everything' is incorrect; the verb 'talk' should be followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to topics. Also, 'I'm quite' is incomplete and should be 'I'm quite tired' to make sense.

× I can't talk everything in my date with my friend

✓ I can't talk about everything on my date with my friend

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'date' is 'on' or 'during'. Also, 'talk about' is the correct verb-preposition combination.

× sometimes it umm, subject in school on the drama of friends in my school.

✓ sometimes it is about subjects in school or the drama of friends in my school.

The phrase 'subject in school on the drama' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'about subjects in school or the drama of friends' to correctly express the topics discussed.

× Would I prefer chat with group of people?

✓ Would I prefer to chat with a group of people?

After 'prefer', the correct form is 'to chat' (infinitive) or 'chatting' (gerund). Also, 'group of people' needs the article 'a' before it.

× Because in my group friends have many members so I can I can hear different open of them.

✓ Because my group of friends has many members, so I can hear different opinions from them.

The phrase 'group friends' is incorrect; it should be 'group of friends'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular noun 'group'. 'Open' is incorrect and should be 'opinions'.

× I'm keen on to communicate face to face

✓ I'm keen on communicating face to face

The phrase 'keen on' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form), not 'to' plus infinitive.

× when I am talk with umm, I can see erection reaction of them about my story.

✓ when I am talking with them, I can see their reaction to my story.

'I am talk' should be 'I am talking' (present continuous). 'Erection reaction' is incorrect; it should be 'their reaction'. Also, 'of them' should be 'their' to show possession.

× so we have quarrelled between me and my friends.

✓ so we have quarreled between me and my friends.

The verb 'quarrelled' is correct in British English, but in American English, it is 'quarreled'. Also, the phrase 'between me and my friends' is awkward; better to say 'so my friends and I have quarreled.'