聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문법 오류를 줄이고 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. 예를 들어, 'I love chatting with my best friend'와 같이 동명사를 사용하고, 문장 간 연결을 부드럽게 하세요.

範例: I love chatting with my best friend because we share our stories and catch up on each other's lives. We usually chat while enjoying tea, coffee, or some small tasty desserts.

建議: 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하고, 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 또한, 연결어를 사용해 문장 흐름을 자연스럽게 하세요.

範例: We usually chat about our relationships and friendships because it helps us understand each other better. Also, I like discussing things I want to buy in the future and asking for their opinions.

建議: 문법 오류를 수정하고, 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows deeper communication'와 같이 말하세요.

範例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it's easier to have deep and meaningful conversations. I value close friendships and prefer more personal communication.

建議: 중복되는 표현을 줄이고, 문장을 더 간결하고 명확하게 만드세요. 또한, 'better'와 같은 비교급을 올바르게 사용하세요.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see facial expressions and better understand feelings and emotions. This makes sharing and communicating more effective.

建議: 시제와 문법을 정확히 사용하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 예를 들어, 'I want to fix it as quickly as possible'와 같이 표현하세요.

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, but I want to fix it as quickly as possible. I try to understand their feelings rather than just insisting on my own opinion.

× I love to chatting with my best friend.

✓ I love chatting with my best friend.

After 'love', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. 'Love to chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'love chatting'.

× I love to share my story and catching up their stories.

✓ I love to share my story and catch up their stories.

'Love to share' is correct, but 'catching up' should be parallel to 'share' and use the base form 'catch up'.

× We usually chatting while we sharing some teas or coffees or little small tasteful dessert.

✓ We usually chat while we share some teas or coffees or little small tasteful desserts.

'Usually' requires the simple present tense: 'chat' and 'share' instead of 'chatting' and 'sharing'. Also, 'dessert' should be plural to match 'teas' and 'coffees'.

× We usually chat about our relationship and friendships because it help us understanding each other better and I love to chat about things that I wanted to buy in the future and I love to discuss about it and asking their opinion about it.

✓ We usually chat about our relationships and friendships because it helps us understand each other better, and I love to chat about things that I want to buy in the future. I also love to discuss them and ask their opinions about it.

'Relationship' should be plural to match 'friendships'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'it'. 'Understanding' should be 'understand' after 'help us'. 'Wanted' should be 'want' to match present tense. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not need 'about'. 'Asking' should be 'ask' to maintain parallel structure. 'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match 'their'.

× I prefer to chat with my only one friend because it is easy to deeply communicated when you are only chatting with one person and I'm a person who prefer to more deep friendship and deep communication.

✓ I prefer to chat with my only one friend because it is easy to communicate deeply when you are only chatting with one person, and I'm a person who prefers deeper friendship and deep communication.

'Communicated' should be 'communicate' to match 'is easy to'. 'Prefer' should be 'prefers' to agree with 'I am a person who'. 'More deep' should be 'deeper' as the comparative form of 'deep'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because when you communicate face to face, you can actually see their face expression and understanding their feelings and emotion more better.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when you communicate face to face, you can actually see their facial expressions and understand their feelings and emotions better.

'Face expression' should be 'facial expressions'. 'Understanding' should be 'understand' to maintain parallel structure. 'More better' is incorrect; 'better' alone is sufficient. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'feelings'.

× Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friend, but if I do argue with my friend, I wanted to fix it in as fast as possible and I try to understand their feelings more than just pressing my opinion to them.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friend, but if I do argue with my friend, I want to fix it as fast as possible and I try to understand their feelings more than just pressing my opinion on them.

'Wanted' should be 'want' to express present intention. 'In as fast as possible' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'as fast as possible'. 'Pressing my opinion to them' should be 'pressing my opinion on them'.