聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more natural and complete. Avoid incomplete sentences like 'So being relaxed is very.' Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel motivated. Moreover, talking to them allows me to share my thoughts and get support when needed.

建議: Your answer covers the topic but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like 'and' or 'also'. Avoid redundancy and ensure sentences are complete.

範例: We usually chat about various topics such as daily life, relationships, and work problems. Also, if I need advice, I always ask my best friend for help.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are minor errors like 'gain learn new experiences'. Try to use correct collocations and linking words to improve fluency and coherence.

範例: It totally depends on my mood, but generally, I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to socialize and learn new experiences.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to complete your sentences and use correct verb forms. Also, organise your ideas logically with linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: My preference changes depending on my mood. Sometimes, when I want to be isolated, I prefer communicating via social media. However, most of the time, I enjoy face-to-face conversations.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains awkward phrasing like 'I would like to tend to solve'. Try to use simpler and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, which is normal in any relationship. However, I always try to resolve the problem quickly to maintain our friendship.

× Really I enjoy chatting with my friends because when I communicate with them I feel that I get relaxed and have motivation for life. So being relaxed is very.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends because when I communicate with them, I feel relaxed and motivated in life. So, being relaxed is very important to me.

The original sentence has awkward word order and incomplete structure. 'Really I enjoy' should be 'I really enjoy' for natural English. The phrase 'have motivation for life' is better expressed as 'motivated in life'. The last sentence 'So being relaxed is very.' is incomplete and needs a complement like 'important to me'. Adding commas improves clarity.

× While we chat about everything in daily life and also our relationships are problems in life and in work life. And I if I need an advice I will definitely ask help from my best friend.

✓ We chat about everything in daily life, including problems in our relationships and work life. If I need advice, I will definitely ask for help from my best friend.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'While' and 'And' to start sentences, causing confusion. 'While' suggests contrast but is not followed by a contrasting clause. 'And I if I need an advice' is ungrammatical; 'I if' is incorrect and 'an advice' should be 'advice' as it is uncountable. Also, 'ask help' should be 'ask for help'. The correction improves sentence structure and grammar.

× It totally depends on my mood and generally I prefer to chat with a group of people because it allows me to socialize with people and gain learn new experiences.

✓ It totally depends on my mood, and generally I prefer to chat with a group of people because it allows me to socialize and learn new experiences.

The phrase 'gain learn new experiences' is incorrect; 'gain' and 'learn' are redundant here. 'Socialize with people' is repetitive after 'chat with a group of people', so 'socialize' alone suffices. Adding a comma before 'and' improves readability.

× That's also completely changed on my mood because sometimes I want to be isolated from people, that times I prefer to communicate by social media, but most of the times I also want to.

✓ That also completely depends on my mood because sometimes I want to be isolated from people; at those times, I prefer to communicate via social media, but most of the time I also want to meet face-to-face.

'Changed on my mood' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'depends on my mood'. 'That times' should be 'at those times'. 'Communicate by social media' should be 'communicate via social media'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'I also want to', so it is completed with 'meet face-to-face' to make sense.

× Sometimes I have an argument with my friends that's absolutely normal with any relationships, but when I have an argument I would like to tend to solve my problem with my friend.

✓ Sometimes I have an argument with my friends; that's absolutely normal in any relationship. But when I have an argument, I tend to solve my problems with my friend.

'That's absolutely normal with any relationships' is incorrect; it should be 'in any relationship' (singular). 'I would like to tend to solve' is awkward and redundant; 'I tend to solve' is sufficient. Also, 'my problem' should be plural 'my problems' to match general usage. Punctuation is improved for clarity.