聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте неясных выражений, таких как "I like it through the speed". Лучше использовать связующие слова для логичности и добавить конкретные детали.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends and family every day because it allows me to communicate quickly and easily. For example, I can ask questions or share news instantly without waiting, which was difficult in the past.

建議: Используйте более формальный и точный язык, избегайте сленга, такого как "spill the tea". Добавьте связующие слова и конкретные примеры, чтобы ответ был более содержательным и логичным.

範例: We usually talk about our daily experiences and interesting news we hear during the day. In the evenings, it's a routine for us to share how our day went. Besides that, we discuss various topics like hobbies and current events.

建議: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясные выражения, например, "we have a child in the telegram". Следует использовать правильную грамматику и более четко выражать мысли, а также использовать связующие слова.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group with my two close friends because we have a Telegram group where we discuss various topics together. I find it more enjoyable to share ideas and support each other in a group setting.

建議: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и добавить более точные детали. Используйте связующие слова и избегайте повторов.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication when it comes to friendship because meeting in person helps build a stronger connection. Therefore, I always try to find free time to meet my close friends rather than just chatting online.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильную структуру предложений и связующие слова для ясности и логичности.

範例: I don't consider myself or my friends as conflict people. Sometimes we have different opinions, but we usually listen to each other and discuss calmly. I believe it's important to understand others without judging them.

× I like it through the speed.

✓ I like it because of the speed.

The preposition 'through' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to express the reason is 'because of'. So, 'I like it because of the speed' is the correct form.

× You can get the message fast and you can try to ask anything, whatever you want, not to wait for long time like in the past.

✓ You can get the message fast and you can try to ask anything you want, without waiting for a long time like in the past.

The phrase 'not to wait for long time' is incorrect. The correct form is 'without waiting for a long time'. Also, 'whatever you want' is better as 'anything you want' in this context.

× We usually spill the tea and during the day we get so many interesting gossips and in the evening it's like a routine to write them the message about how was the day.

✓ We usually spill the tea and during the day we get so much interesting gossip, and in the evening it's like a routine to write them a message about how the day was.

'Gossip' is an uncountable noun, so 'so many' is incorrect; it should be 'so much'. Also, 'gossips' is incorrect as plural; 'gossip' is uncountable. 'The message' should be 'a message' because it's not a specific message. The word order in 'how was the day' should be 'how the day was'.

× I have only two close friends due to this we have a child in the telegram where we discuss about anything together.

✓ I have only two close friends; because of this, we have a chat group on Telegram where we discuss anything together.

'Due to this' is better replaced with 'because of this' for clarity. 'Child in the telegram' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'chat group on Telegram'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'.

× I can't imagine my life without them and it's the most common thing here.

✓ I can't imagine my life without them, and creating groups like this is the most common thing here.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. Adding 'creating groups like this' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× If your friends you create groups.

✓ If you have friends, you create groups.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and subject-verb agreement. Adding 'you have' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence.

× When it comes to the friendship, I think that it's the best way to meet face to face.

✓ When it comes to friendship, I think that meeting face to face is the best way.

'The friendship' is incorrect; 'friendship' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'. Also, 'to meet face to face' is better expressed as 'meeting face to face' in this context.

× I can't imagine how to be friends if you haven't seen him or her, so I'm quite flexible and always trying to find some free time for close people.

✓ I can't imagine how you can be friends if you haven't seen someone, so I'm quite flexible and always try to find some free time for close people.

The phrase 'how to be friends' is incorrect; it should be 'how you can be friends'. Also, 'him or her' is awkward here; 'someone' is more natural. 'Always trying' should be 'always try' to match the present tense.

× I can't call myself or my friends. Conflict people, we usually listen to each other and trying to discuss it.

✓ I can't call myself or my friends conflict people; we usually listen to each other and try to discuss issues.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the sentences and correcting verb forms improves clarity and grammar.

× we usually listen to each other and trying to discuss it.

✓ we usually listen to each other and try to discuss it.

After 'and', the verb should be in the base form 'try' to match 'listen' in the present tense.

× Yes, sometimes. Of course we have different points of views and it's OK.

✓ Yes, sometimes. Of course, we have different points of view and it's OK.

The correct phrase is 'points of view' (singular 'view'), not 'points of views'.

× You don't have to judge anyone. Just listen and understand him or her.

✓ You don't have to judge anyone. Just listen and understand them.

Using 'them' as a singular gender-neutral pronoun is more natural and inclusive than 'him or her'.