聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“chant”应为“chat”，“by talk with friends”应为“by talking with friends”。建议注意动词形式和词汇准确性，同时避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me reduce stress from studying or work. Also, when I have problems, they can give me valuable advice, which is very helpful.

建議: 回答中多次使用“uh”和“umm”，影响流畅度。词汇使用不准确，如“chant”应为“chat”。建议减少语气词，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I usually chat about sports with my friends, especially badminton. Since I have made many friends through playing badminton, it has become a common topic for us to discuss.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“a child with friend is a thing that's relaxing”不合逻辑。建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并注意语法和句子结构。

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it feels more relaxing. When talking with many people, it can be hard to express yourself and listen to others at the same time.

建議: 回答不完整且重复使用语气词，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并完整表达原因。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because people can better understand each other's emotions. Talking in person makes the conversation more meaningful and clear.

建議: 回答内容矛盾且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用正确的语法表达观点，并避免矛盾。

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because disagreements are natural even among close friends. However, we always try to resolve them quickly.

× Yes, I like chant with my friends because I think you can reduce your stress from study or your work by talk with friends and sometimes you have some problem.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I think you can reduce your stress from study or your work by talking with friends and sometimes you have some problem.

动词“like”后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。此处“chant”和“talk”应改为“chatting”和“talking”。

× Uh, I usually chant about uh, sports with my friends, uh, just like badminton because I umm, made many friends by playing badminton.

✓ Uh, I usually chat about uh, sports with my friends, uh, just like badminton because I umm, made many friends by playing badminton.

动词“usually”后面应接动词原形或动名词，此处“chant”应改为“chat”。

× I would like chat with only one friend because I think a child with friend is a thing that's relaxing.

✓ I would like to chat with only one friend because I think a chat with a friend is a thing that's relaxing.

“would like”后应接动词不定式“to chat”。另外，“a child with friend”应为“a chat with a friend”，这里是词汇错误。

× So if you talk with many people you not only need to tell what you want to say and you need a listening other.

✓ So if you talk with many people you not only need to tell what you want to say but also need to listen to others.

“need a listening other”结构错误，应为“need to listen to others”。“listen”后需接介词“to”，且“others”表示别人。

× I prefer to talk, have a small talk face to face, uh, because I think umm people can feel others emotion only when they face to face to have a talking uh, and also uh when people when friends talk about something face to face, it makes.

✓ I prefer to talk, have a small talk face to face, uh, because I think umm people can feel others' emotions only when they face to face to have a talk, uh, and also uh when friends talk about something face to face, it makes sense.

“others emotion”应为“others' emotions”，表示所有格。短语“have a talking”应为“have a talk”。

× Uh, I usually chant about uh, sports with my friends, uh, just like badminton because I umm, made many friends by playing badminton.

✓ Uh, I usually chat about uh, sports with my friends, uh, just like badminton because I umm, have made many friends by playing badminton.

此处描述的是从过去到现在的经历，应使用现在完成时“have made”而非一般过去时“made”。

× Of course, uh, I haven't experience of arguing with friends, uh, because I think it is can't avoid uh, even through your friends, you also, uh, will have different uh, arguments.

✓ Of course, uh, I haven't experienced arguing with friends, uh, because I think it can't be avoided, uh, even among your friends, you will also, uh, have different, uh, arguments.

“haven't experience”应为“haven't experienced”，动词需用过去分词形式。短语“it is can't avoid”语法错误，应为“it can't be avoided”。“even through your friends”应为“even among your friends”。