聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ ngữ không tự nhiên và có nhiều từ thừa, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ lặp lại và nói rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, không quá dài và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như "the reason it goes" hay "occupied days". Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and forget about my busy day. Talking with them feels like a free therapy that refreshes my mind and lifts my mood.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh dùng các cụm từ không tự nhiên như "dig down their stories" hay "share love together". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

範例: Usually, we talk about our daily experiences and share funny stories we have encountered. For example, last week, I told my friends about a hilarious incident at work, which made everyone laugh and feel closer.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác như "gravitate towards a talking" hay "understand about her lives in her preferences". Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng lý do và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows me to focus on the conversation and understand her better. This way, our relationship becomes closer and more meaningful.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp từ và không hoàn chỉnh, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và hoàn thành ý tưởng của mình. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn thích giao tiếp trực tiếp hơn.

範例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to understand each other's emotions better. Social media often lacks the personal touch and non-verbal cues that are important in conversations.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác như "friendship is not only infallible" và "because of their nickel something like that". Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh nói lắp và trình bày rõ ràng cách bạn giải quyết mâu thuẫn với bạn bè.

範例: Yes, sometimes we have disagreements because of different opinions. However, we always try to resolve them by talking openly and understanding each other's point of view.

× gossiping with friends can help me relieve stress and also, uh, recharge my battery after an occupied days.

✓ gossiping with friends can help me relieve stress and also, uh, recharge my battery after occupied days.

The phrase 'an occupied days' incorrectly mixes singular article 'an' with plural noun 'days'. The article 'an' should be removed to correctly match the plural noun 'days'.

× chatting with friends is as a free therapy for my mind

✓ chatting with friends is like free therapy for my mind

The preposition 'as' is incorrectly used here. The correct expression is 'like free therapy' to indicate similarity or comparison.

× we usually dig down their stories about our daily lives, umm, and funny story that we came across

✓ we usually dig down their stories about our daily lives, umm, and funny stories that we came across

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to agree with the plural verb 'came across' and the context of multiple stories.

× we usually tell to each other a really entertaining story

✓ we usually tell each other a really entertaining story

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'tell' when followed by an indirect object like 'each other'.

× I definitely gravitate towards a talking with one friend

✓ I definitely gravitate towards talking with one friend

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the gerund 'talking'. Gerunds do not require an article.

× help me deeply understand about her lives in her, uh, preferences

✓ help me deeply understand her life and her preferences

The verb 'understand' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'lives' should be singular 'life' to refer to one person.

× help me deeply understand about her lives in her, uh, preferences which make her, uh, closer

✓ help me deeply understand her life and her preferences which make us closer

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used with 'closer'; it should be 'us' to indicate mutual closeness. Also, 'lives' should be singular 'life'.

× However, I also perceive the.

✓ However, I also perceive that.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'perceive'. Adding 'that' introduces a clause to complete the sentence.

× I definitely prefer communicating face to face too, via social media.

✓ I definitely prefer communicating face to face rather than via social media.

The sentence is contradictory as it suggests preference for both face to face and social media. Using 'rather than' clarifies the preference.

× This because a direct, uh, interaction can, can help us, uh, know more about each other in terms of, uh, emotion or something like that.

✓ This is because direct interaction can help us know more about each other in terms of emotions or similar aspects.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'This'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context.

× Uh, why social media can maybe lack of, uh.

✓ Uh, social media may lack that.

The phrase 'lack of' is incorrectly used after 'can maybe'. The correct form is 'may lack' without 'of'.

× Yes, our friendship is not only infallible.

✓ Yes, our friendship is not infallible.

The phrase 'not only infallible' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'not infallible' meaning it can have faults.

× we may have a differing opinions about one thing

✓ we may have differing opinions about one thing

The article 'a' should be removed because 'opinions' is plural and does not require an article here.

× because of their nickel something like that.

✓ because of some small issues or something like that.

The phrase 'their nickel' is unclear and incorrect. It likely intends to express 'small issues' or 'minor problems'.

× So to, to deal with it, uh, we try to talk more together to discuss the.

✓ So, to deal with it, we try to talk more together to discuss it.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'it' completes the object of 'discuss'.