聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且内容更具体。

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when we share our experiences during festivals or meetings.

建議: 回答较简单，缺少连贯性和细节。建议使用连接词丰富内容，并具体说明话题。

範例: We usually talk about our daily lives, including school activities and our grades, because these topics are important to us.

建議: 回答不够流畅且重复，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并给出原因。

範例: I prefer chatting with close friends because I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts with people I know well.

建議: 回答有重复且表达不够简洁。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达，并具体说明原因。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for better understanding and feels more personal than chatting on social media.

建議: 回答含糊且语法错误较多。建议用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明争论的原因。

範例: Yes, sometimes we argue when we have different opinions, but it usually helps us understand each other better.

× Yes, me always chatting about our daily experience during the festival or the. Meeting.

✓ Yes, I am always chatting about our daily experiences during the festival or the meeting.

这里“me always chatting”结构不正确，应该使用主语“I”加上动词的正确形式。根据语境，使用现在进行时“am chatting”更合适。同时，“experience”应为复数形式“experiences”，因为指多个经历。

× Yes, me always chatting about our daily experience during the festival or the. Meeting.

✓ Yes, I am always chatting about our daily experiences during the festival or the meeting.

“experience”应使用复数形式“experiences”，因为指的是多次经历。

× Yes, me always chatting about our daily experience during the festival or the. Meeting.

✓ Yes, I am always chatting about our daily experiences during the festival or the meeting.

“me”作为主语使用不正确，应该用主格“I”。

× We usually talk about our daily life, our school life and our grades and yeah.

✓ We usually talk about our daily lives, our school life, and our grades, and yeah.

“daily life”应使用复数形式“daily lives”，因为指的是每个人的日常生活。

× No, no, I I only like to. I only prefer to chat with my familiar people. I don't want to talk. I don't want to talk about more, talk about, talk more about myself to the. To strangers.

✓ No, no, I only like to. I only prefer to chat with people I am familiar with. I don't want to talk more about myself to strangers.

“my familiar people”表达不自然，应该用“people I am familiar with”。“talk about more, talk about, talk more about”重复且不连贯，简化为“talk more about myself”。

× No, no, I I only like to. I only prefer to chat with my familiar people. I don't want to talk. I don't want to talk about more, talk about, talk more about myself to the. To strangers.

✓ No, no, I only like to. I only prefer to chat with people I am familiar with. I don't want to talk more about myself to strangers.

“to the strangers”中“the”不必要，应该直接用“to strangers”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it is a good way to let us feel the the core of the social communicate and it is I think it is more comfortable to to me is more comfortable to chat face to face, not via social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is a good way to let us feel the core of social communication, and I think it is more comfortable for me to chat face to face, not via social media.

“the core of the social communicate”中“communicate”应为名词“communication”，且不需要“the”修饰“social communication”。“more comfortable to to me”结构错误，应为“more comfortable for me”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it is a good way to let us feel the the core of the social communicate and it is I think it is more comfortable to to me is more comfortable to chat face to face, not via social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is a good way to let us feel the core of social communication, and I think it is more comfortable for me to chat face to face, not via social media.

“more comfortable to to me”中“to to me”重复且用词错误，应改为“more comfortable for me”。

× Yeah, sometimes, uh, when I, when they come up to time, come up at different points, I will argue with them.

✓ Yeah, sometimes, uh, when they come up with different points, I argue with them.

“come up to time”表达不正确，应为“come up with different points”。“I will argue”在描述习惯时应使用一般现在时“I argue”。