聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'guess' và 'people' khi nói về bản thân. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I definitely like chatting with my friends because I am an extroverted person. I often chat or text them online to keep in touch, which helps strengthen our bond.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'uh'. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết mạch lạc.

範例: Usually, we talk about our daily activities to keep the conversation going. Sometimes, we have heart-to-heart talks to understand each other better.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và nói lắp. Cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp và bổ sung lý do cụ thể.

範例: Personally, I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group because I find it easier to have meaningful conversations that way.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói lắp, đồng thời hoàn thiện câu cuối để câu trả lời trọn vẹn hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: To be honest, I prefer face-to-face conversations rather than communicating via social media because it allows us to understand each other better and express our feelings more clearly.

建議: Câu trả lời cần tránh nói lắp và sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'a fool that'. Hãy trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng với cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: Yes, of course. We often argue because through arguments, we get to know each other better and develop more understanding and empathy.

× I'm a very extrovert people so I often chatted with my friend or texting them online so that they I can keep the connection and also it strengthen the bond between us.

✓ I'm a very extroverted person so I often chat with my friends or text them online so that I can keep the connection and also strengthen the bond between us.

The word 'people' is plural but refers to a singular subject here, so it should be 'person'. 'Extrovert' should be 'extroverted' as an adjective. 'Chatted' should be present tense 'chat' to match the habitual action. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'them'. 'Texting' should be 'text' to keep parallel verb forms. 'They I can' is incorrect word order; corrected to 'I can'. 'It strengthen' should be 'strengthen' to agree with the plural subject 'connection and bond'.

× So usually, uh, we often say about our daily basic, like what we doing in the day and so that we can keep, uh, on with the conversation.

✓ So usually, we often talk about our daily basics, like what we do in the day so that we can keep on with the conversation.

'Say about' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'talk about'. 'Daily basic' should be plural 'daily basics'. 'What we doing' lacks auxiliary verb; should be 'what we do' for present simple tense. 'Keep on with the conversation' is correct but 'keep on with' is more natural than 'keep, uh, on with'.

× Sometime we, uh, have a really heart to heart conversation because to know each other better, we really have.

✓ Sometimes we have really heart-to-heart conversations because to know each other better, we really do.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Heart to heart' should be hyphenated as 'heart-to-heart' when used as an adjective. 'Conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match 'sometimes'. The phrase 'we really have' is incomplete; adding 'do' clarifies the meaning.

× So for me personally, I would, uh, prefer to chat with my, uh, my only one friend, then, uh, to check with another, uh, friends because it is really based on me.

✓ So for me personally, I would prefer to chat with my one and only friend rather than to chat with other friends because it really depends on me.

'My only one friend' is awkward; 'my one and only friend' is correct. 'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. 'Check with another friends' is incorrect; 'check' should be 'chat' to match context, and 'another friends' is incorrect plural; should be 'other friends'. 'It is really based on me' is awkward; 'it really depends on me' is correct.

× Like I do not really like with talking a lot of person.

✓ I do not really like talking with a lot of people.

'Like with talking' is incorrect; 'like talking with' is correct. 'A lot of person' is incorrect; should be 'a lot of people' for plural.

× So to be honest, I would prefer a face to face conversation more than, rather than a social media because I feel like face to face, we have a better understanding of each other than, uh, through, uh, media platform And also if we can express.

✓ To be honest, I would prefer face-to-face conversation rather than social media because I feel like face-to-face, we have a better understanding of each other than through media platforms. Also, we can express ourselves better.

'A face to face conversation more than, rather than' is redundant; 'prefer face-to-face conversation rather than' is correct. 'A social media' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and needs no article. 'Media platform' should be plural 'media platforms'. The last sentence is incomplete; adding 'we can express ourselves better' completes the thought.

× Yes, of course, why not? We, we actually often have many arguments, uh, because a fool that, uh, arguments we can know each other better and therefore we can have a better understanding and empathy for each other to know well, better than.

✓ Yes, of course, why not? We actually often have many arguments because through those arguments we can get to know each other better and therefore have a better understanding and empathy for each other.

'Because a fool that arguments' is incorrect; should be 'because through those arguments'. 'We can know each other better' is better expressed as 'we can get to know each other better'. The phrase 'to know well, better than' is incomplete and awkward; removing it clarifies the sentence. Modal verb 'can' is used correctly here but the sentence structure needed correction.