聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意语法准确性。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来描述你的感受。

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I'm stressed from work. For example, I often share my frustrations about my boss, which helps me feel supported and relaxed.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，并且避免口语填充词。

範例: I usually talk about my work frustrations with my friends. Besides that, we also discuss the latest TV shows, which I find very enjoyable.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议简化句子，注意单复数和词汇拼写，表达更清晰。

範例: Actually, I prefer talking to one person rather than a large group because talking to many people makes me feel anxious and uncomfortable.

建議: 回答中有很多语气词和语法错误，建议减少口语填充词，注意时态一致性和句子完整性，使表达更流畅自然。

範例: I prefer chatting with people on social media, like WeChat, because face-to-face conversations sometimes make me feel physically uncomfortable and anxious. Texting helps me feel more relaxed.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，注意词汇选择，避免重复，并且用更自然的方式表达情绪和行为。

範例: No, I rarely argue with friends. When conflicts happen, I feel very stressed and anxious, so I prefer to avoid disagreements.

× I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I feel stressed from my work share.

✓ I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I feel stressed from my work share.

此句中“work share”表达不清，可能想表达“workload（工作量）”，但不属于语法错误，故不修改。

× For example, I usually share my frustration about my leaders with my friends, which is which helps me feel released and supported.

✓ For example, I usually share my frustration about my leaders with my friends, which helps me feel relieved and supported.

句中“which is which helps”重复且不正确，应删除多余的“which is”。“released”应为“relieved”，表示“感到宽慰”。

× Talking with my friends you should really usually help me relax.

✓ Talking with my friends usually helps me relax.

句子结构混乱，“you should really usually”位置错误且多余，应简化为“usually helps”。

× I usually share some frustration about my leader from work with my friends and besides that, I also discuss the latest TV shows we watch, uh, which makes me enjoyable.

✓ I usually share some frustration about my leader from work with my friends, and besides that, I also discuss the latest TV shows we watch, which makes me feel happy.

“makes me enjoyable”用法错误，应为“makes me feel happy”或“makes me enjoy it”。

× Actually I like to talk to one people rather than a large group talking to talking to many people made me feel anxious and com uncomfortable so I like to talk to people one-on-one.

✓ Actually, I like to talk to one person rather than a large group. Talking to many people makes me feel anxious and uncomfortable, so I like to talk to people one-on-one.

“one people”应为“one person”，单复数错误。句子过长且重复，应拆分并调整。

× Talking to talking to many people made me feel anxious and com uncomfortable so I like to talk to people one-on-one.

✓ Talking to many people makes me feel anxious and uncomfortable, so I like to talk to people one-on-one.

“com uncomfortable”拼写错误，应为“uncomfortable”。时态应与上下文一致，改为现在时“makes”。

× Uh, I prefer chatting with people on social media, for example, on WeChat, uh, sometimes I talk to people face to face, make me feel physically uncomfortable and feel anxious.

✓ Uh, I prefer chatting with people on social media, for example, on WeChat. Sometimes I talk to people face to face, which makes me feel physically uncomfortable and anxious.

“make me feel”缺少主语，应加“which”。“feel anxious”前不需重复“feel”。

× So I like to check to, I like to text with people on WeChat, which made me feel relaxed.

✓ So I like to chat, I like to text with people on WeChat, which makes me feel relaxed.

“made”应为现在时“makes”，与前文时态保持一致。

× No, I hardly argue with someone. Umm when I have a conflict with others I I will feel stressed.

✓ No, I hardly argue with anyone. When I have a conflict with others, I feel stressed.

“will feel”不合适，表达习惯用一般现在时。

× So I would I prefer avoiding to have a colleague with others.

✓ So I prefer avoiding conflicts with others.

“have a colleague with others”表达错误，应为“avoiding conflicts with others”。“would I prefer”语序错误，应简化为“I prefer”。