聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid redundancy and improve fluency by using more varied vocabulary and sentence structures. For example, instead of repeating 'really' and 'chatting', use synonyms and combine ideas more smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends as it helps me unwind and escape from my daily routine. Our conversations are refreshing, and we often exchange personal stories and support each other through problems.

建議: Reduce filler words like 'uh' and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details to make your answer clearer and more coherent.

範例: I usually talk about our daily lives, including work and mutual friends. Additionally, we share problems and offer each other advice, which helps me relax and take a break from work.

建議: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'stories in the LA'. Be more specific and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, clarify your preference clearly.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a close friend because we can share detailed stories about our daily lives and work. Moreover, we support each other by discussing problems, which helps me relax.

建議: Good answer but improve grammar and vocabulary accuracy. For example, use plural forms correctly and avoid awkward phrases like 'offer mechanical'. Also, add linking words for coherence.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to connect on a deeper level. When we meet in person, we can observe body language and facial expressions, which help us understand each other's feelings better. In contrast, social media conversations tend to be mechanical and lack the emotional connection of real-life interactions.

建議: Improve grammar by using correct plural forms and prepositions. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide a concluding sentence to summarize your point.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. For instance, one of my close friends has a different political ideology than I do. Therefore, when we discuss politics, we have different viewpoints and often debate. However, these discussions remain friendly, and we respect each other's opinions.

× Uh, sometime, uh, we share our problems and seek help from each other.

✓ Uh, sometimes, uh, we share our problems and seek help from each other.

The word 'sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at some unspecified time' and is singular. The correct plural adverb here is 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Use 'sometimes' when referring to events that happen occasionally.

× Sometimes we discuss about our friend and work.

✓ Sometimes we discuss our friends and work.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Saying 'discuss about' is incorrect. The correct form is 'discuss' followed directly by the object.

× Sometimes we discuss about our friend and work.

✓ Sometimes we discuss our friends and work.

Besides the preposition error, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to more than one person in general conversations.

× So it's, it's really give me a good escape from the work.

✓ So it really gives me a good escape from work.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement and redundancy issues. 'It's, it's' is repetitive and incorrect. The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'the work' should be 'work' as a general noun without article.

× I usually chat with my friend about our daily lives and routines.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives and routines.

Since 'our' implies more than one person, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the plural possessive pronoun.

× Sometime, uh, we share our problems and seek advice from each other.

✓ Sometimes, uh, we share our problems and seek advice from each other.

Same as before, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× It really gives me a break from my daily routine and help me uh, be more relaxed.

✓ It really gives me a break from my daily routine and helps me, uh, be more relaxed.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Both verbs connected by 'and' share the same subject and must agree in number.

× When you meet in person, we can observe body language and facial expression which help us understand each other's feeling better.

✓ When you meet in person, we can observe body language and facial expressions which help us understand each other's feelings better.

'Facial expression' and 'feeling' should be plural 'facial expressions' and 'feelings' because they refer to multiple instances. Also, 'each other's' implies plural possession.

× In contrast, social media conversation offer mechanical and lack of emotional connection that comes from the real life interaction.

✓ In contrast, social media conversations offer mechanical and lack emotional connection that comes from real-life interaction.

'Conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to agree with plural verb 'offer'. Also, 'lack of' should be 'lack' without 'of' after 'offer'. 'Real life' should be hyphenated as 'real-life' when used as an adjective.

× Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends. In fact, one of my close friend follows a different political ideology than I do.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends. In fact, one of my close friends follows a different political ideology than I do.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' because 'one of my' requires the noun to be plural.

× So whenever we discuss about politics in the country, we have different viewpoint and we discuss a lot.

✓ So whenever we discuss politics in the country, we have different viewpoints and we discuss a lot.

'Discuss' does not take the preposition 'about'. Also, 'viewpoint' should be plural 'viewpoints' to match 'different'.

× So whenever we discuss about politics in the country, we have different viewpoint and we discuss a lot.

✓ So whenever we discuss politics in the country, we have different viewpoints and we discuss a lot.

Same as above, 'viewpoint' should be plural 'viewpoints' to agree with 'different'.

× Though these discussions are friendly and we respect each other's.

✓ Though these discussions are friendly and we respect each other.

'Each other's' is a possessive pronoun and requires a noun after it. The correct phrase is 'each other' to indicate mutual respect.