聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer wa natural desu ga, 'especially this person is a very good friend of me' no you na phrase wa eigo toshite wa fushizen ni kikoemasu. Motto seikaku ni 'I have many good friends, and I especially enjoy chatting with one close friend' to iu hou ga yoi desu. Mata, 'All this feeling, my honest feeling of what I feel every day' wa fukuzatsu de wakari nikui node, motto kantan de meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. I have many good friends, but I especially enjoy talking with one close friend. When I chat with them, I feel relaxed and happy because we share our honest thoughts.

建議: Answer wa yoku setsumei sarete imasu ga, nagai bun de chotto fukuzatsu ni natte imasu. 'Starting from the weather today' no ato ni tsuzuku setsumei wa motto wakariyasuku bunshou wo tsukutte kudasai. Mata, 'like some study issues and friendship issues and work issues also' wa 'such as' ya 'including' wo tsukatte, motto seikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

範例: I usually chat about various topics. For example, we talk about the weather, like when it rains and how it affects our mood. We also discuss study problems, friendship matters, and work-related issues.

建議: Answer wa rikai dekimasu ga, 'he or she is chatting to me or talking to me and she or he' no you na phrase wa fushizen desu. 'He or she is talking to me' dake de juubun desu. Mata, 'I have a feeling that he or she would more focus on what I'm saying' wa 'I feel that he or she pays more attention to me' to iu hou ga natural desu. Setsumei wa motto kantan ni shite kudasai.

範例: I prefer talking with only one friend because I can focus on the conversation. I feel that my friend pays more attention to what I say. In a group, sometimes people do not listen to me, which makes me feel sad.

建議: Answer wa yoku setsumei sarete imasu ga, 'on The Voice' wa fushizen na phrase desu. 'in their voice' to iu hou ga tadashii desu. Mata, 'I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can read their facial expressions and understand their tone of voice, which is difficult through text messages' to iu fuu ni motto seikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see their facial expressions and hear their tone of voice. This helps me understand their feelings better. Text messages on social media do not show these important cues.

建議: Answer wa sukoshi fukuzatsu de, 'I have very, very strong opinion' wa 'a very strong opinion' to shiyou shite kudasai. 'I don't really argue about my philosophical feeling or if I am agree or disagree with his or her political views' wa wakari nikui node, motto kantan ni 'I usually avoid arguing about philosophical or political views' to setsumei shite kudasai. Mata, 'Usually, yeah' wa fushizen desu node, suteru ka motto seikaku ni shite kudasai.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends. I only argue when I have a very strong opinion about something I want to do. Usually, I avoid arguing about philosophical or political topics because I respect their views.

× especially this person is a very good friend of me

✓ especially this person is a very good friend of mine

The phrase 'friend of me' is incorrect because 'me' is an object pronoun and cannot be used possessively. The correct possessive pronoun is 'mine'. Use 'friend of mine' to indicate possession correctly.

× I can concentrate on what he or she is chatting to me or talking to me and she or he

✓ I can concentrate on what he or she is saying to me and she or he

The phrase 'chatting to me' is awkward; 'saying to me' or 'talking to me' is more natural. Also, 'and she or he' is incorrect in order and pronoun case; it should be 'and he or she' to maintain parallel structure and correct pronoun order.

× I have a feeling that she or he would more focus on what I'm saying

✓ I have a feeling that he or she would focus more on what I'm saying

The pronoun order should be 'he or she' for natural English. Also, the adverb 'more' should come after the verb 'focus' to form 'focus more' rather than 'more focus'.

× I prefer to communicate in face to face

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face

The phrase 'in face to face' is incorrect because 'face to face' is an adverbial phrase and does not require a preposition. The correct form is simply 'communicate face to face'.

× if I am agree or disagree with his or her political views

✓ if I agree or disagree with his or her political views

The verb 'agree' should not be preceded by 'am' because 'agree' is a verb, not an adjective. The correct form is 'if I agree or disagree'.