聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using complete sentences and avoiding repetition. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details without hesitation or filler words.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually talk to them every day during my free time, either by phone or through messaging apps.

建議: Improve your answer by using correct verb forms and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, provide more specific details to enrich your response.

範例: Usually, we chat about how we spent our day and discuss plans for the next school day.

建議: Focus on clarity and structure by avoiding filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because I have many close friends, and we have a WhatsApp group where we share interesting conversations.

建議: Make your answer more coherent by using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid hesitation and provide clear reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is more comfortable to see the person's face and make eye contact, which helps me understand them better.

建議: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repetition or incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your opinion and give specific details.

範例: Yes, I think everyone argues sometimes, but I rarely argue with my friends because I try to stay calm and understand their point of view.

× Yes I am really enjoy chatting with my friends so do I like to it's it is every day umm in my free time I'm chatting on with them or talking on phone.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. I like to do it every day. Umm, in my free time, I chat with them or talk on the phone.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'am really enjoy' which mixes the present continuous 'am' with the simple verb 'enjoy'. The correct form is 'I really enjoy' for present simple tense. Also, 'I'm chatting on with them' is awkward; 'I chat with them' is clearer. 'Talking on phone' needs the definite article 'the' before 'phone'. Splitting the sentence improves clarity.

× Usually we chatting about how how we spend our day. Or just discuss tomorrow, our school day.

✓ Usually, we chat about how we spend our day or just discuss our school day tomorrow.

The phrase 'we chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'we chat' in present simple tense. Also, the sentence structure is fragmented; combining the ideas into one sentence improves flow. 'Discuss tomorrow, our school day' is awkward; 'discuss our school day tomorrow' is clearer.

× Uh, I must prefer a chat with a group of people, uh, as I'm friends, a lot of people, I have UH-4, my best friends. So we have a group in WhatsApp and I most prefer chatting or chat in this because it's interesting and more.

✓ Uh, I prefer to chat with a group of people because I have many friends, including my four best friends. We have a group on WhatsApp, and I prefer chatting there because it's interesting and more fun.

'I must prefer a chat' is incorrect; 'I prefer to chat' is correct. 'I'm friends, a lot of people' is unclear; it should be 'I have many friends'. 'I most prefer chatting or chat in this' is awkward; 'I prefer chatting there' is better. Also, 'in WhatsApp' should be 'on WhatsApp' (preposition correction).

× So we have a group in WhatsApp and I most prefer chatting or chat in this because it's interesting and more.

✓ So we have a group on WhatsApp and I prefer chatting there because it's interesting and more fun.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to WhatsApp groups; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'chat in this' is awkward; 'chat there' is clearer.

× I think it depends on who I'm talking to, but I must prefer communicate face to face because for me it's comfortable to see the face of the people and uh, look the eye on the those people who I'm talking and little.

✓ I think it depends on who I'm talking to, but I prefer to communicate face to face because for me it's comfortable to see people's faces and look into the eyes of those I'm talking to.

'I must prefer communicate' is incorrect modal and verb usage; 'I prefer to communicate' is correct. 'Look the eye on the those people' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'look into the eyes of those people'. Also, 'the face of the people' should be 'people's faces' for natural expression.

× Yes, I think it's been all of the between the all of the people. So I'm not argues too much, but it's so rarely it's so rare can be but because I'm not so.

✓ Yes, I think it happens to all people. So I don't argue too much, but it is very rare because I'm not like that.

'It's been all of the between the all of the people' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'it happens to all people' is correct present tense usage. 'I'm not argues' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't argue'. 'It's so rarely it's so rare can be but because I'm not so' is confusing; rephrased for clarity and correct tense.