聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'jumping' thay vì 'chatting'. Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên chia câu rõ ràng hơn để người nghe dễ hiểu.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us understand each other better. For example, I often talk about my hobbies and share details about my daily life.

建議: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời để tránh bị bỏ dở và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về các chủ đề bạn thường nói để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

範例: I usually chat about my hobbies, like reading books or playing video games. We also share memorable events that happened during the day, which helps us stay connected.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi lặp từ và ngữ pháp nhỏ. Hãy chú ý tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Actually, I'm an introvert, so I prefer talking with one or two close friends rather than a large group because in smaller settings, I can easily express my thoughts and feelings.

建議: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it's help helps' và 'easy understand'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng, đồng thời tránh để câu bị dừng đột ngột.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps us understand each other better without misunderstandings, as we can observe body language and facial expressions.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'sometime' thay vì 'sometimes'. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because I believe healthy disagreements help us understand each other better. For example, when we have different opinions about plans, we discuss them openly.

× Yes, I really like chatting or jumping with my friends.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting or jumping with my friends.

No correction needed here as 'like chatting' and 'like jumping' are correct uses of verb + -ing form after 'like'. However, 'jumping' seems contextually odd; possibly 'jumping' is a misused word here, but grammatically it's correct.

× I think the communication is the best way able to understand each others and for example I will talk about my hobbies and say about my daily life.

✓ I think communication is the best way to understand each other, and for example, I will talk about my hobbies and my daily life.

The phrase 'the communication' is incorrect; 'communication' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Able to understand each others' is incorrect; it should be 'to understand each other' because 'each other' is reciprocal pronoun and does not take plural 'others'. Also, 'say about my daily life' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about my daily life'.

× We also normally talk about our daily lives and share each other about the memorable events occurred during the day and they always.

✓ We also normally talk about our daily lives and share with each other the memorable events that occurred during the day.

The phrase 'share each other about' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'share with each other'. Also, 'events occurred' needs 'that' to connect the clause: 'events that occurred'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and they always' which is incomplete and should be removed or completed.

× Actually, I'm an introvert person, so I prefer to talk with one or two close friends instead of a large group because in a small scale I feel that the I I can easily express my thoughts or feeling.

✓ Actually, I'm an introverted person, so I prefer to talk with one or two close friends instead of a large group because on a small scale I feel that I can easily express my thoughts or feelings.

'Introvert person' should be 'introverted person' as 'introverted' is the adjective form. 'In a small scale' should be 'on a small scale' as the correct preposition is 'on'. The repeated 'the I I' is a typo and should be 'I'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match 'thoughts'.

× I prefer face to face communication because it's help helps us to easy understand each other without misunderstanding because we can refer to the body language or the expression.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps us to easily understand each other without misunderstanding since we can refer to body language or expressions.

'It's help' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps' for subject-verb agreement. 'To easy understand' should be 'to easily understand' because 'easily' is the adverb modifying the verb 'understand'. 'The body language or the expression' should be 'body language or expressions' without 'the' as these are general concepts.

× Yes, sometime I will argue with my friends because I think a healthy agreement will help us to understand each other and express our feelings, express our thoughts.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because I think a healthy argument helps us to understand each other and express our feelings and thoughts.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'I will argue' is future tense but context suggests present habitual action, so 'I argue' is correct. 'Healthy agreement' is incorrect; it should be 'healthy argument' meaning a constructive disagreement. 'Will help' should be 'helps' to match present tense habitual action. Repetition of 'express our feelings, express our thoughts' can be combined for clarity.