聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте повторений и неуверенных выражений, таких как "I don't know" и "Uh". Также старайтесь использовать более разнообразную лексику и конкретизировать время общения.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends through apps like WhatsApp and Instagram. I usually spend about three to five hours a day talking with my best friend Sabina because we are very close.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные времена и более точные выражения, а также связки для плавности речи.

範例: Usually, we chat about our classmates and friends, sharing news or gossip. We also talk about what we have done during the day and how we are feeling.

建議: Ответ слишком длинный и немного запутанный. Следует структурировать ответ, избегать повторений и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group of three, including my friends Sabina and Eldar. We usually share how we feel and what we have done during the day, which makes group chats more enjoyable for me.

建議: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать более связные и точные выражения, избегать лишних слов.

範例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it helps us understand each other better. However, since I live abroad, I often use WhatsApp or Instagram to stay in touch.

建議: Ответ можно сделать более естественным и связным, избегая слов-паразитов и улучшая грамматику.

範例: No, I don't like arguing with my friends. Usually, if there is a problem, we talk calmly to solve it instead of arguing.

× Uh, for, I don't know, for five or three hours a day, I chat with my best friend Sabina because we can't live without each other.

✓ Uh, for, I don't know, for three to five hours a day, I chat with my best friend Sabina because we can't live without each other.

The phrase 'for five or three hours a day' is awkward and unclear. Using 'three to five hours a day' is a clearer and more natural way to express an approximate range of time.

× To tell the truth, most of the time we're just gossiping about people, about our classmates, our some friends, or just talking about what are we done at the day or how's our mood.

✓ To tell the truth, most of the time we're just gossiping about people, about our classmates, some of our friends, or just talking about what we have done during the day or how our mood is.

The phrase 'our some friends' is incorrect; it should be 'some of our friends'. Also, 'what are we done at the day' is incorrect; the correct form is 'what we have done during the day'. 'How's our mood' should be 'how our mood is' to maintain proper sentence structure.

× Actually it depends on a person.

✓ Actually, it depends on the person.

The phrase 'depends on a person' is less natural than 'depends on the person' when referring to a general individual. Also, a comma after 'Actually' improves readability.

× Most of time I chat with a group where we are three people, me, my friends, Sabina and Eldar.

✓ Most of the time I chat with a group of three people: me, my friends Sabina and Eldar.

The phrase 'Most of time' should be 'Most of the time'. Also, 'a group where we are three people' is awkward; 'a group of three people' is correct. The list of friends should not have a comma before 'Sabina and Eldar' as they are part of the same group.

× Because we have such kind of group and we talk with each other like talking.

✓ Because we have this kind of group and we talk with each other like talking.

The phrase 'such kind of group' is incorrect; 'this kind of group' is more natural. The phrase 'talk with each other like talking' is awkward and unclear; however, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, minimal correction is applied.

× Everyday we ask how do we feel or what we have done during the day or just making some calls.

✓ Every day we ask how we feel or what we have done during the day or just make some calls.

'Everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'; the correct phrase is 'Every day' meaning 'each day'. Also, in indirect questions, the word order should be 'how we feel' not 'how do we feel'. 'Just making some calls' should be 'just make some calls' to maintain parallel structure.

× Of course it's better to communicate face to face, but as now I'm living in another country just we can talk via WhatsApp or social media like Instagram messenger.

✓ Of course it's better to communicate face to face, but since I am now living in another country, we can only talk via WhatsApp or social media like Instagram Messenger.

The phrase 'as now I'm living' is incorrect; 'since I am now living' is correct. 'Just we can talk' is incorrect; 'we can only talk' is correct. Also, 'Instagram messenger' should be 'Instagram Messenger' as a proper noun.

× But I definitely think that to communicate face to face is better because you should you can understand each other better.

✓ But I definitely think that communicating face to face is better because you can understand each other better.

The phrase 'you should you can' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'you can'. Also, 'to communicate face to face' is better expressed as 'communicating face to face' in this context.

× No, because I'm not a person who loves arguing with friends.

✓ No, because I'm not a person who loves to argue with friends.

The phrase 'loves arguing' is acceptable but 'loves to argue' is more natural in this context.

× Uh, most of time if something happening bad or wrong, we try to communicate with each other, talk to each other so that we can solve a problem.

✓ Uh, most of the time if something bad or wrong happens, we try to communicate with each other, talk to each other so that we can solve a problem.

'Most of time' should be 'most of the time'. 'Something happening bad or wrong' is incorrect; it should be 'something bad or wrong happens' to use the correct verb form and word order.