聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of listing platforms abruptly, you can say: "I enjoy chatting with my friends on various social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, and WhatsApp. Among these, I prefer Instagram because it has a user-friendly interface and allows me to share stories, messages, and videos easily."

範例: I enjoy chatting with my friends on various social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, and WhatsApp. Among these, I prefer Instagram because it has a user-friendly interface and allows me to share stories, messages, and videos easily.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve clarity by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For instance, you could say: "I usually chat about various topics such as clothing brands I've recently discovered, funny memes, and videos related to TV shows I've been watching, including reels from those shows."

範例: I usually chat about various topics such as clothing brands I've recently discovered, funny memes, and videos related to TV shows I've been watching, including reels from those shows.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example: "I prefer chatting with one friend or a group depending on the situation and topic. If the topic is something not everyone in the group knows about, like a specific show or brand, I prefer talking to one friend who shares the same interest to have a more meaningful conversation."

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend or a group depending on the situation and topic. If the topic is something not everyone in the group knows about, like a specific show or brand, I prefer talking to one friend who shares the same interest to have a more meaningful conversation.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to compare both methods effectively. For example: "I prefer communicating via social media because it is more convenient and requires less time and effort compared to face-to-face conversations. Additionally, social media allows me to stay connected easily and engage with friends anytime."

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because it is more convenient and requires less time and effort compared to face-to-face conversations. Additionally, social media allows me to stay connected easily and engage with friends anytime.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. For example: "Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions and perspectives. However, when disagreements arise, I believe it is important to handle them calmly, try to understand each other's views, and maintain a good relationship."

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions and perspectives. However, when disagreements arise, I believe it is important to handle them calmly, try to understand each other's views, and maintain a good relationship.

× most I users Instagram because it have really good user interface and I can share stories and messages videos through.

✓ most I use Instagram because it has a really good user interface and I can share stories, messages, and videos through it.

The pronoun 'I' is incorrectly placed before 'users'; it should be 'use'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'Instagram'. Additionally, the sentence structure is unclear and missing the object 'it' after 'through'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I usually talk about umm, so the clothes, the clothing brand I've encountered with or some recent memes or like videos or something related to the shows I've been watching and reels I've been encountered with of those shows.

✓ I usually talk about, umm, clothes, clothing brands I've encountered, some recent memes, videos, or something related to the shows I've been watching and reels I've encountered from those shows.

The preposition 'with' after 'encountered' is incorrect; 'encountered' does not require a preposition here. Also, 'the clothes' and 'the clothing brand' are better as plural 'clothes' and 'clothing brands' to match general discussion. Removing unnecessary prepositions and adjusting plurality improves grammatical correctness.

× Friend, it usually depends on the situation and on the topic I am talking about.

✓ It usually depends on the situation and the topic I am talking about whether I chat with a friend or a group.

The original sentence starts with 'Friend,' which is unclear and incomplete. The sentence structure is fragmented and does not clearly answer the question. Rephrasing to a complete sentence clarifies the meaning and improves coherence.

× Because if a person in a group does not know about the relative show or the brand I'm talking about, so if they are not familiar with it may not be vital for me to talk about that because it will.

✓ If a person in a group does not know about the related show or brand I'm talking about, and they are not familiar with it, it may not be important for me to talk about that because it will not be relevant.

The sentence is a fragment starting with 'Because' and ends abruptly. The use of 'relative' should be 'related'. The sentence needs to be complete and clear, avoiding conjunctions at the start and ensuring the thought is fully expressed.

× Via social media is more, uh, vital source rather than chatting face, uh, talking face to face because, umm, being face to face would require more commute and uh, more resources.

✓ Communicating via social media is a more vital source than talking face to face because being face to face would require more commuting and more resources.

The phrase 'more, uh, vital source' is awkward; 'a more vital source' is correct. 'More commute' should be 'more commuting' as 'commute' is a noun here. Also, 'chatting face' is incomplete and should be 'talking face to face'. Correct preposition and noun forms improve clarity.

× And through social media it's more easy and more engaging and connecting to us.

✓ And through social media, it's easier, more engaging, and better at connecting us.

'More easy' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'easier'. 'More engaging and connecting to us' is awkward; 'better at connecting us' is clearer. Also, adding a comma after 'social media' improves readability.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends because we all have different opinions and different perspective.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends because we all have different opinions and different perspectives.

'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to match 'opinions' and indicate multiple viewpoints. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch and improves grammatical agreement.

× For example, when we discuss about something we strongly oppose and disagreement arises, I believe it's important how to handle it with calmly and try to understand and maintain a good relationship.

✓ For example, when we discuss something we strongly oppose and disagreement arises, I believe it's important to handle it calmly, try to understand, and maintain a good relationship.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. 'Handle it with calmly' is incorrect; it should be 'handle it calmly'. Also, 'how to handle it' is awkward; 'to handle it' is better. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and fluency.