聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Жауабыңызда артық қайталаулар мен грамматикалық қателер бар. Сұраққа нақты және қысқа жауап беріп, қосымша ақпаратты байланысты сөздер арқылы ұсыныңыз. Мысалы, 'Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows us to share experiences and have fun together.'

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows us to share experiences and have fun together.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөздерді қайталау және сөйлем құрылымында қателер бар. Нақты және түсінікті сөйлемдер құрып, байланысты сөздерді қолданыңыз. Мысалы, 'We usually chat about various topics such as school, sports, and share advice or funny stories, which makes our conversations interesting.'

範例: We usually chat about various topics such as school, sports, and share advice or funny stories, which makes our conversations interesting.

建議: Жауабыңыз түсініксіз және грамматикалық қателер көп. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, мысалдармен толықтырыңыз. Мысалы, 'I prefer chatting with a small group of friends, especially when discussing school subjects like physics and mathematics, because we can help each other.'

範例: I prefer chatting with a small group of friends, especially when discussing school subjects like physics and mathematics, because we can help each other.

建議: Жауабыңыз толық емес және сөйлемдер түсініксіз. Нақты және толық жауап беріп, байланысты сөздерді қолданыңыз. Мысалы, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more relaxed and personal compared to social media.'

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more relaxed and personal compared to social media.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөйлем құрылымы мен сөздерді қолдануда қателер бар. Нақты және толық жауап беріп, мысал келтіріңіз. Мысалы, 'I sometimes argue with friends, especially if they say something negative about me or my family, which I dislike.'

範例: I sometimes argue with friends, especially if they say something negative about me or my family, which I dislike.

× We share, we sharing to together and and secondly, it gets fun from for them and for me.

✓ We share, we are sharing together and secondly, it is fun for them and for me.

The verb 'sharing' needs to be in the present continuous form 'are sharing' to correctly express the ongoing action. Also, 'to together' is incorrect; 'together' alone suffices. 'It gets fun from for them' is awkward; 'it is fun for them' is clearer.

× It gets fun from for them and for me.

✓ It is fun for them and for me.

The phrase 'gets fun from for' is incorrect. The correct preposition to express enjoyment is 'fun for' someone.

× So we have so many topics where about chatting.

✓ So we have so many topics to chat about.

The phrase 'topics where about chatting' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'topics to chat about' or 'topics about chatting'.

× For example, when we talk we often exchange advice or funny stories which makes the consideration more interesting Like like school, like school, like school attention or sports because most of my most of my friends get sports.

✓ For example, when we talk, we often exchange advice or funny stories which make the conversation more interesting, like school, school activities, or sports because most of my friends play sports.

'Makes the consideration' is incorrect; it should be 'make the conversation'. Repetition of 'like school' is unnecessary. 'School attention' is unclear; 'school activities' is better. 'Most of my friends get sports' is incorrect; 'play sports' is the correct phrase.

× which makes the consideration more interesting

✓ which make the conversation more interesting

The subject 'advice or funny stories' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes'.

× most of my most of my friends get sports.

✓ most of my friends play sports.

The phrase 'most of my most of my friends' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, 'get sports' is incorrect; 'play sports' is the correct expression.

× we I usually takes an A rounding switch includes my, my, my ability, my ability subjects like physics, mathematics because when I talked about with other classes I cannot get.

✓ I usually take a group that includes my abilities and subjects like physics and mathematics because when I talk with other classes, I cannot understand.

'I usually takes' is incorrect; 'I usually take' is correct for first person singular. 'An A rounding switch' is unclear; 'a group' or 'a class' is better. 'My ability subjects' should be 'my abilities and subjects'. 'When I talked' should be 'when I talk' to maintain present tense. 'I cannot get' is vague; 'I cannot understand' is clearer.

× when I talked about with other classes I cannot get.

✓ when I talk with other classes, I cannot understand.

The phrase 'talked about with other classes' is incorrect; 'talk with other classes' is correct. Also, 'cannot get' is vague; 'cannot understand' is clearer.

× Especially face to face, it's face to face to face is that type of the communication, which include which include relax and, uh, when you take it, when you taking an offline on offline conversation.

✓ Especially face-to-face communication is the type that includes relaxation, and when you have an offline conversation.

'Face to face to face' is repetitive; 'face-to-face' is correct. 'Which include relax' should be 'which includes relaxation'. 'When you take it, when you taking an offline on offline conversation' is incorrect; 'when you have an offline conversation' is correct.

× when you taking an offline on offline conversation.

✓ when you have an offline conversation.

The phrase 'taking an offline on offline conversation' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'have an offline conversation'.

× This gets your, your increasing for your hormone dopamine and how, However, when, uh, however, if we.

✓ This increases your dopamine hormone levels. However, if we...

The phrase 'gets your, your increasing for your hormone dopamine and how' is unclear and incorrect. The correct expression is 'increases your dopamine hormone levels'.

× It depends the situations and in which type they are talk.

✓ It depends on the situation and the type of conversation.

The phrase 'depends the situations' is incorrect; it should be 'depends on the situation'. 'In which type they are talk' is incorrect; 'the type of conversation' is better.

× if they talking about for my own, uh, for my own or my family sports, uh, of course I don't, I don't, I really disagree because they are talking about me and I I dislike that opinion when.

✓ If they are talking about me or my family's sports, of course I really disagree because they are talking about me and I dislike that opinion.

'If they talking' should be 'if they are talking'. 'About for my own' is incorrect; 'about me' is correct. 'I don't, I don't, I really disagree' is redundant; 'I really disagree' suffices. The sentence ending 'I dislike that opinion when' is incomplete; it should end properly.